Spike has no problems sharing the castle with his busty sister, incest is bad. However, having another mare just as busty that isn't related to him living there too might just break his strong will. Especially when she showers at the same time as him
11892415 Sorry, just a running gag in all my stories. As this one was growing into my highest rated story I felt a need to include the joke here too. Plus it adds to the growing danger outside from the storm and makes the reader question if it might be magically made
11892432 I'll agree on that. I kind of added it at the last minute. I could have worked it into the scene better. Maybe we could have seen him sneaking a peak in an earlier chapter. Totally sorry for confusing you.
11892503 Yeah, I keep posting a lot good work today. I have one more story getting an update in under an hour. Not a clop, but still another story I've been wanting to expand for a while.
There aren't enough of these setups in categories I like! I have a weakness for the cliche of "stuck alone together, this eventually leads to a relationship" XD can't wait to see how it ends!
11892526 Yeah, this chapter did seem to most rush. I already had the full threesome made for a while. And since I went out of my way to setup the incest divide, I needed a way to lead into them sharing her thus this chapter. The finale will go much smoother.
11892524 Hmm, Chrysalis also outside where a frozen full cocked Thunderlane is laying. I might just have a quick gag in the opening scene that would be quite funny. No, not a full on extra clop for her, just a quick joke to better connect my casual murder of Thunderlane... again.
11892574 I've already go it on the list. Let me just get some of the other the bigger Spike Ships already on my list out of the way first. This month was purely built around StarlightXSpike with a little more. May will feature SpikeXSmolder, June I think is getting SpikeXRainbow Dash or SpikeX something else, I need to look at the list.
I don't see what killing off Thunderlane does for the story.
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Sorry, just a running gag in all my stories. As this one was growing into my highest rated story I felt a need to include the joke here too. Plus it adds to the growing danger outside from the storm and makes the reader question if it might be magically made
11892420
Oh, okay. I guess, just from my point of view, it seemed kinda random and didn't make much sense. That's all.
11892432
I'll agree on that. I kind of added it at the last minute. I could have worked it into the scene better. Maybe we could have seen him sneaking a peak in an earlier chapter. Totally sorry for confusing you.
nice work
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Yeah, I keep posting a lot good work today. I have one more story getting an update in under an hour. Not a clop, but still another story I've been wanting to expand for a while.
I bet Chrysalis is having a feast if she was nearby.
There aren't enough of these setups in categories I like! I have a weakness for the cliche of "stuck alone together, this eventually leads to a relationship" XD can't wait to see how it ends!
11892526
Yeah, this chapter did seem to most rush. I already had the full threesome made for a while. And since I went out of my way to setup the incest divide, I needed a way to lead into them sharing her thus this chapter. The finale will go much smoother.
11892524
Hmm, Chrysalis also outside where a frozen full cocked Thunderlane is laying. I might just have a quick gag in the opening scene that would be quite funny. No, not a full on extra clop for her, just a quick joke to better connect my casual murder of Thunderlane... again.
11892543
Lol
Also I bet she's gonna be proud of Ocellus in any fic where the cute book buggo gets banged by Spike.
11892574
I've already go it on the list. Let me just get some of the other the bigger Spike Ships already on my list out of the way first. This month was purely built around StarlightXSpike with a little more. May will feature SpikeXSmolder, June I think is getting SpikeXRainbow Dash or SpikeX something else, I need to look at the list.
11892576
Ok
sweet chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next
11892623
Thank you. One more Monday, one more chapter.
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The category/setup to clarify was in that cliche I mentioned XD
Anyway hope to see it smoothed out!
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And I agreed, my weakest chapter, but kind of needed.