Leech, I've been reading your stuff for a while and I usually am so busy with the smut that I forget you're a genuinely good writer. The fact that not only was there was no lewd in this chapter, but I didnt want any, just to keep reading the story, is a good reminder.

Poor Snowy has it really hard right now. Let's just hope it won't get any worse for her.

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N...no u

okay, I gave this a shot for reading and I'll say its really good, even when you're looking for a not-porn story. I really hope you finish it and make it a nice long series

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Three chapters to go!

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i hope you continue this story in the future with sequels. I love your writing and your not-porn sections are really interesting. You're an amazing writer.

Yes please a nice long story because it’s so good I can’t wait for the next chapter ❤️❤️

So good lol

Poor snowy had a bad day

“I may not have such a garment at the ready, but that will hardly stop me from making you one!” Rarity laughed, snatching her hoof. “If any of you need me, be a dear and call me,” she loudly announced to the duo of prospective customers as she towed the kirin along.

Something I love to do all the time is read all of Rarity's lines with a manic edge, so something as innocent as her laughing is her threatening to fall from the edge into insanity.

While there goes my theory for now.but this was still a blast to read.