Cherry chunga!

11580026 She's getting raped ripe.

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…. pretty sure that i didn’t say sorry for anything, just recognized to getting really ahead by judging all the fandom in the same sack

the whole point of saying to each one their own thing is just to understand that there’s people that like stuff that i hate (like starbucks and those weird cheese fanatics)

i don’t apologize and i won’t stop considering anyone small balled cowards, i just let the venom out of my miserable skin and keep enjoying my stuff and also
let everyone continue doing their stuff

One thing I noticed: you described Sweetie Belle is restrained somehow... but you don't tell us how. Tied on her back? On all fours? Hogtied? Strapped to a bench? You probably had an idea of how she's tied up, since you have several characters slap her ass. Now it would be a good idea to have some description to convey that to your audience!

11580174 That's a good observation. Thanks for pointing it out.

The idea was that she was restrained all over her body by the furtight bodysuit that limited her movement.

Either way, it's fixed now. Her sorry state should be clearer now.

A lot of the comments correctly discuss this as fiction and what FoE means thematically or why people do or don't like it, but the overwhelming majority are a few dorks who talk about "what the caribou do" as if this isn't fictional, and I don't know how you deal with that.

Don't get a lot of these especially with foals

11580213 You know how some bronies get their panties in a knot whenever they spot a pothole? Well, the problem with a pothole Is real, whether you're talking about fiction or reality.

The principles of alternative possible societies are also real, whether they exist or not.

So, yes, discussing something isn't a problem. It's only when you start talking about implementing something in real life that the line between fantasy and reality gets crossed.

11580215 Fall of Equestria is a well-known universe. I'm surprised there aren't loads of stories like this one published on a regular basis.

The theme of FoE is the corruption of innocence. And what's more innocent than a filly?

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Glad to be of help! And it is much more clear now, thank you!

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And that’s why I want to murder caribou hunter style from the division universe.

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Also I’m surprised no one has gotten sick or ill or something. Since I don’t thing they even wash themselves or anything. Heck they probably fuck even when one of the mares are sick or something.

11580396 But what would stories be without the antagonists? The Caribou seem like the ultimate antagonists to me.

My headcanon is that only the strong survive.

In RL, before the black plague, only 1% of people were immune to it. But then half of them died, and the genetic immunity rose to 2%.

The stronger the natural/artificial selection, the better the genes.

Since they keep the mares like animals, they probably perform selection among them like farmers. If humans use artificial selection, surely the Caribou do as well.

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Do we eat them too?

I absolutely love the idea of treating them like disposable trash. I hope you write more of this. Their misery fills my brain with dopamine.

11580846 Finally somepony with a distinguished taste for the finner finer things in life.

The story ain't over yet.

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> " ponepony Finally somepony with a distinguished taste for the finner things in life."

¿Is "finner" a Typo? or ¿will the story have SeaPonies?

11583881 SeaPonies are hot. I'd do them. I appreciate the finner and gilly things in life.

Umm, the chapters "Horny Morning" and "School" are identical. Did you make a mistake?

11623954 Fixed.

I have no idea how that happened. I feel very ashamed.