Jesus. That's fucked up and beautiful. It's everything I'd expect from you.

... go on...

...Well, that caught me by surprise.

Uhmmmm... ok? That was something? Hot, but kinda not. Ultimately I feel sorry for her... poor thing.

Damn...I feel really bad for the Element of Kindness and I'm not even obe for second person views...but still, coming from you, this was really impressive. She tired so hard to pleasew the male that she gave up her innonoce of being with a real male....poor Flutter's. I'll give it a fav and a like but I did not really enojy the vomit.

I dont know how I would deal with throw up on my dick....

It's just..
I don't even ..

Okay, I read this because it's interesting to see another author's take on "Fluttershy gets drunk", but I was like "Urgh, human on pony? Do not want." And then "More urgh, she vomits in the process of giving oral sex."

It's well-written (as well-written as porn can be, anyway), but it's not really my cup of tea.

what the balls...

i can be a good marefriend

You somehow managed to make me feel worse for Fluttershy than I already did. I didn't think that was physically possible.

if you took out the vomiting i could get into it........ its still well written though....

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Eww but somehow still arousing

My main problem with this is that horses cannot vomit.

Overall, this was a pretty good read.
For starters, it taught me to never accept a BJ from a really intoxicated girl.
Second, the image of... whatever the hell happened... was somewhat pleasing, even if I was covered in vomit in the process.
Third, I learned that Fluttershy can make a good marefriend.

So, thank you for writing this excellent, yet mildly disgusting, fan-fiction story for the community to read.
You receive four stars.
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1350182 There is a precedent in the show, though. Remember the Baked Bads?

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WTF

I. AM. SO. HARD. RIGHT. NOW.

ps. good work it was great

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You call this mildly disgusting?
Oh gawd. You haven't read 120 days of Blueblood then have you?

You had me when Fluttershy sucks a dick covered in her own puke.
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Uh. Uhu. Ubuuuuhuhuhuhuhhhh noooooo not after the night I had last night.
I'm sorry darf but I had to skim read this one :(
Next chapter XD

All I have to say about this is

fluttershy why its safe to say we all need an adult