There is plainly sentence structure probles and some words that don't fit or make the intention of a sentence impossible for me to guess accurately.
Still nice chapter and rather confusing humor, perhaps references I don't know?
Why would dancing be evidence that someone isn't a Changeling?
I absolutely don't understand the reasoning of the conflict between these characters. Further what was the eating other joke about? Sounded more like a psychotic move to voice at all.
11771844 1. Could you point them out so that me or my ghost writer can fix it? 2. I think it was a form of joking. 3. Could you point where 'eating other joke' is?
There is plainly sentence structure probles and some words that don't fit or make the intention of a sentence impossible for me to guess accurately.
Still nice chapter and rather confusing humor, perhaps references I don't know?
Why would dancing be evidence that someone isn't a Changeling?
I absolutely don't understand the reasoning of the conflict between these characters.
Further what was the eating other joke about? Sounded more like a psychotic move to voice at all.
11771844
1. Could you point them out so that me or my ghost writer can fix it?
2. I think it was a form of joking.
3. Could you point where 'eating other joke' is?