Can there be Facesitting in a future chapter?

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Zebra sitting on pony or vice versa?

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Both can work.

Would love to see Twilight getting bred in front of her brother

Where's the anthro tag!? Is it under the floorboards, I know its here somewhere. You don't do zebradom and not ruin it with anthro

But for real while some will claim how tired this idea is, the fact that its not anthro is unique in itself. Looking forward to more to cum.

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Oh I already have a few ideas for a couple ponies already, Twilight being one of them.

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Thanks!

Well this should be interesting

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Awesome!!!

I look forward to what you write for this story and your future stories!!

Maybe sprout from gen 5??

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What about him?

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You ever think you'll do something about him??

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Like, maybe a clop story with him and Izzy?? Or another mare??

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I’m not sure, what are you thinking of?

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A clop story him and either Izzy or pipp. Something to do with his redemption

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If you ever come up with a full idea then feel free to message me directly on FimFiction, I might write it if I like it (however I have been lacking much motivation to write as of recent).

Another thing: Sprout X Hitch?

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That is a ship, yes.

And thanks.

Wish you luck on writing, and I will think about the idea

I like to see Twilight Velvet getting impregnated in front of her husband.

Would love to see zebras invading the home of the main six mothers and breed them.

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How about either Fluttershy, Dr Fauna, or even both of them are dominated by a zebra or zebras and the are also being bred by one of the animals that are with them and the zebras compete with whatever animal would be appropriate such as a dog, a wild feral horse, or for the more exotic like an elephant and they use magic to make their pussies stretch to their sizes. And see who will be victorious in breeding the girls. As for tags, cum inflation, magic induced stretching, double vaginal, and breeding and domination.

An okay start, noticed some odd typos, but other than that did not notice that many "crappy writing" parts. And nice of you to point that no offence meant there. Could maybe add "potential gary-stu-warning" for those who have issue with that part of this part of the fandom or something.

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What do you mean by ‘ gary-stu’?

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Its an alternate term for "Mary-sue"; which basically is term for "perfect characters"(some being op self-insert) who always win/succeed in whatever they do, usually with absolutely no negative consequences (, like "X takes over Equestria and has s*x with all of the Y"). It can often lead to a boring story or flat characters depending what kind of story is being made. There should be some vids about the term explaining it better. "Terrible Writing Advice" has some good ones about many writing things.
Hopefully that helped with the term? Keep up your writings, like say with the potential second chapter on ya "Horsing Around" story.

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If I do make a bestiality fic (which does sound right up my alley) I’d probably make it its own one-shot as it wouldn’t be the zebras doing the fucking then.

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Just thought it'd be interesting to see an anthro or normal pony story where a guy is in a breeding competition with a male animal on whom will have the mare they're fucking become pregnant from.

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Both a stallion and an animal on a mare sounds really kinky, I like it! If you ever come up with a full idea then feel free to message me about it.

And by the way, if you guys have any kinky ideas you want to tell me about for possible future chapters then go ahead!

You should write a chapter where a zebra stallion makes a homemade pizza with his lovely earth pony marefriend and then the two of them snuggle while watching Kung Fu Panda 2

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Would that include… Hoof holding? Or would that be faaar too kinky?

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C’mon, the entire point of clopfics is for people to masturbate to, there’s no point writing it if they’ll just cum immediately.

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Unfortunately that's all I had to go on, the other detail would be Dr Fauna considering she's a vet and maybe Fluttershy too for obvious reasons.

Why can't there be a revers of this and the ponies taking over? just so tired of zebra supremacy stuff

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Or, considering the ponies' matriarchal structure, the zebras take over and discover that conquest means raising the foals and being homemakers as the ponies go out and do stuff. It's the exact opposite of human dynamics: the mares have the jobs and rule the home, while the stallions take care of the foals and actually rule the home. It's a nice subversion of the usual striped plot, and allows for plenty of breeding and other fun while still keeping an interesting power dynamic.

Imagine being a zebra colt who, upon reaching majority, has his pick of willing concubines. All you have to do is stay at home, play with the foals, and wait for your wives to get home from work and pounce you all at once.

This mostly a kink suggestion, but what if the zebras inscribed runes on the bodies of the ponies, which had some magical effects on them ? Could something simple as a symbol tattooed around the mare's genitals that makes her become more lustful, or makes her to take bigger sizes, or blocks orgasms without her master's permission, etc.

It might sound like a cheating thing to use these to conquer ponies. Could be something only a couple of zebras like to use. Or it could be something of a special occasion, like a binding ceremony for when the pony itself is finally broken and is ready to belong to a zebra master.

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I personally like the idea but I think it would probably take too long to explain and utilise, especially since I’m focusing on writing more smut from now on. Thanks for the idea though.

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nor my point my point being pony domination over zebras

Ooh a simple, straightforward zebradom story about conquering Equestria? Loving it, I'll keep an eye on this~

I have a soft spot for stories like this, porn logic through and through. Some silly but still hot and fun reading.

As for ideas, I'm a Rarity lover. Despite my love I do enjoy stories where she gets ruined a bit.

These potions increase arousal and fertility, surely some zebra is going to see how effective it is in larger doses? Take a mare like Rarity, curvy with good foal bearing hips, and make her chug a few potions every day. Maybe a modified one, with bovine growth hormone to flood her teats with milk and add some more cushion to her frame. Transforming that flirty fashionista into a foal-crazy bimbo broodmare.

So yeah, my probably TMI idea for Rarity in this universe. Hope it gives you a good idea or two.

I'll see where this goes. Not sure what to think of this type of story but you have my interest for right now.

As for ideas, I would like to see some of the mane 6 mom's being taken by zebras; I think the milfs would be the experienced enough types to be kept around for breeding along with any nursing for new babies after they are born from other mares. Also, maybe have some stallions or older mares that are being exiled be taken up if the show some potential.

nice

So, I know this might be a little selfish to ask, but I'd rather get an answer of no then not ask at all. Uh....are ocs allowed? Because I kinda wanna request my girl to be in. It's fine if not. I'll enjoy the story regardless.

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Sorry man, I’m afraid not.

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That's alright. Just thought I would ask. Thank you for telling me anyways. Means a lot.

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It’s okay!

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But while I am on the subject, am I able to write my own version of this then? Since it is your idea I want to have proper permission.

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Well what do you mean by that?

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My own spin on it. It won't be directly related to this one, but I dunno. Doing it my way. I'll credit you if you want for the idea.

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I can get inspired by fics occasionally too so I have an idea: Don’t just do your spin on it, try and make your own! It is easier said than done but I’m sure you could try and work on your own one if zebradom is what floats your boat (and I don’t blame you if it does). But that way you don’t have to credit me and can have created your own ‘work of art’ if you will.

Sorry if that sounded blunt or whatever but just start with an idea, then go from there! It doesn’t even matter how long it takes, this isn’t a race and no one’s making you do this anyway.

Oh, and finally, if the core idea is heavily inspired by my fic, then I’ll let you choose if you want to credit me or not.

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Alright, sweet! You're the best, man! Thanks a bunch!

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Anytime!

A zebradom, the stories that I like the most on this site but for me they are very difficult to do due to several factors.

Personally I would like the Mane six to have a treatment similar to that of Celestia and Luna, being gang raped, especially Rainbow, Twilight and Rarity, I'll be waiting for the next chapter.

It would have been more effective if Domina made the royal sisters free use not just for zebra stallions but for pony stallions too. You would want to have pony stallions as allies so that the ponies won't as easily unify against you.