I did enjoy, thanks!

Quite an interesting little concept we have here, very much can't wait for more.

Interesting idea with great pacing. Remember, writing is more of an endurance thing, not a sprint. :)

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I am speechless right now, you have no Idea how much your comment means to me!

Thank you for taking interest in my story, I'll try not to burn myself out before making something out of it!

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You've already made something out of it, now you just gotta stick to your guns and see it through freindo.

The infection begins it's spread.

I'm getting mixed vibes of Splinter, R6S Outbreak, and a bit of halo flood.

I'm loving it so far.

Me encantó mucho el capitulo
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Oh i wanted something like this but I was afraid I had to write it, glad that someone beat me to it

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Hope the story is to your liking :)

The main character is scared, but he is also interested. This is promising. I mean, mc here looks like an ordinary normal person. Usually, characters in other works immediately become obsessed with evolution and the enslavement of all living things. I hope this is not the case here.

T lymphocytes attack the antigen, only to be consumed by my bacterial cells.

*pushes up glasses*

Erm, acktuwally the innate immune response would consist of monocytes and macrophages, not lymphocytes as that would be adaptive, implying the pony had prior exposure to the alien antigen. Furthermore *takes a drag from my inhaler* bacteria don’t utilize phagocytosis as this is more of a eukaryotic adaptation.

Wah— hey! Don’t push me into my locker!

lol keep writing, this fic is great

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I will never recover from this...

I'll just do what most people do: pretend it was intentional for some plot twist later down the line.

To be fair, I'm pretty sure most of the stuff James does in the story is impossible. I love biopunk, but man, both works that inspired this work are not realistic it the slightest, lol.