A man is transported into Equestria under mysterious circumstances, arriving as a clump of dormant cells, awoken by his metiorite's harsh impact. What awaits him next?
I rubbed at the needle-like protrusions penetrating the back of my palm, the hard, black surface still visible in the darkness of the room.
I know that’s supposed to mean hair, but it really makes me think of the movie Splinter, which is somewhat related to where this story looks to be going.
11459312 That doesn't sit right with me. Why would our protagonist not respond to that. It never said he was too tired to care, perhaps implied but not said. I want to like this story, but this is making me weary for things to come. No offense, but confusion can ruin a story. And no, mystery is not the same as confusion.
Hope this finds you well and hope my fears are unfounded.
Reborn as bacteria? Let's hope grandpa nurgle is generous to him.
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If only our protag was a 40k fan
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Doesn't mean he can't get something sort of like that, it would just take longer.
Possession through infection, seems like a cool idea.
I know that’s supposed to mean hair, but it really makes me think of the movie Splinter, which is somewhat related to where this story looks to be going.
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Is it supposed to be hair?
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Oh…
Oh…
Ooh…
Well that’s not good news at all…
Following.
So we have a formless protagonist, I’m curious to see where this goes.
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That doesn't sit right with me.
Why would our protagonist not respond to that.
It never said he was too tired to care, perhaps implied but not said.
I want to like this story, but this is making me weary for things to come.
No offense, but confusion can ruin a story.
And no, mystery is not the same as confusion.
Hope this finds you well and hope my fears are unfounded.
The Braeburn? The the is not needed in this sentence. Also interesting start to the story!
It's very interesting and intriguing.