You get summoned to Equestria, and due to contrived circumstances Twilight Velvet has to keep an eye on you. Fortunately, you can't keep your eyes off her.
Holy fuck, this is the hottest thing I've ever read. Reading this gave me the same kind of adrenaline rush and tense anticipation that I had the first time I had sex. Nothing I have ever read has managed to do that before, and only one story got close.
I can truly say that this is the human-on-pony equivalent of Like Fine Wine, and if it had been written earlier in the fandoms existence, it would likely be spoken of in similar terms. For years.
Unsettled, you roll to the side. You aren’t entirely even sure why you have a boner. You’ve always been into hot dudes, and you’re the only hot dude you’ve seen. All you can figure is that it had something to do with the weird cat game that Twilight Velvet had been playing with you. By the end of the night, you had two bad hands, she didn’t care of you kept up the charade of normal petting. You had risked a shock once more, and got it immediately. Other than gripping the very base of her neck, you had pet the entirety of the top of her back, her sides, her chest floof, her underside neck, her chin, her face, and her ears. You even played it super risky and were tracing the spirals in her horn by the end. Not quite a standard cat pet, but it seemed to pacify her.
"she didn’t care of you kept up the charade of normal petting"
11537104 I probably should have separated with a semicolon as a strong comma instead of a regular comma, and that "of" should be an "if"(nice catch!); but the intent of the clause is to say in a roundabout way that he didn't have to pretend to keep petting her in the safe zone, both hands were in the "bad zone" and she was fully aware.
I'm gonna add the semicolon and fix that "of". Thank you! I mostly self edit and proof-read these, so grammar errors are bound to be in there (though Exuno caught a few for me during his pre-read! Thanks, Exuno!).
Holy fuck, this is the hottest thing I've ever read. Reading this gave me the same kind of adrenaline rush and tense anticipation that I had the first time I had sex. Nothing I have ever read has managed to do that before, and only one story got close.
I can truly say that this is the human-on-pony equivalent of Like Fine Wine, and if it had been written earlier in the fandoms existence, it would likely be spoken of in similar terms. For years.
That was incredibly hot. Well-written and just... WOW! And if you try and downplay it I shall yeet my MP-05 Megatron at you... somehow... ;)
"she didn’t care of you kept up the charade of normal petting"
I do not know what this sentence is saying.
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I probably should have separated with a semicolon as a strong comma instead of a regular comma, and that "of" should be an "if"(nice catch!); but the intent of the clause is to say in a roundabout way that he didn't have to pretend to keep petting her in the safe zone, both hands were in the "bad zone" and she was fully aware.
I'm gonna add the semicolon and fix that "of". Thank you! I mostly self edit and proof-read these, so grammar errors are bound to be in there (though Exuno caught a few for me during his pre-read! Thanks, Exuno!).
My mind is blown, or perhaps drunk. but nonetheless captivated by your story.