Hey random thought is 001 ends up happening in a A Equestria what happens to Celestia?

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Good question I would imagine it would be a more demonic version of the daybreaker that looks like the rest of SCP-001-A with a burning mane and tail a sick smile where her mouth would be and the crown and jewelry slightly merged with her body.

Anthro version of her I imagine still wearing a white dress...

I would try to draw it but my hand is always a bit shaky.

Also assuming Celestia is the personification of the sun when the sun turns bad does that mean Celestia turned bad?

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Maybe the sun itself had something to do with corrupted her?

Another chapter well done and good development and interactions here thus far between Salem and the locals. Wonder how hes gonna explain his background to them without them being shocked and horrified for life, and I bet they will try and look inter his memories to get a better idea of what hes telling them. Dont know much of SCP so have no idea which are the ones that ate the second plate of food or whoever Salem may have been talking to and looking at but I look forward to seeing who they are when they get revealed

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Hmm maybe

Can't wait for next chapter 🙂

Well I believe the next chapter is going to focus on sunlight trauma either way this was really really enjoyable to read and I do hope that you're having an okay time doing this

Yes yes yes can wait for the next one this is gonna get interesting

I like the story but I can't help but feel like you are spreading your self too thin with the number of stories you a writing simultaneously.

Wait I’m so lost what the hell are the food? Was it him? If so how? And who or what is he looking at?! Is he being fallowed by someone?!

Hopefully he will tell them why he is afraid of it and what happen to his world

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Still no answer

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Like river song once said: "Spoilers"

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Gahhh I hate this spelling system sometimes

Nice mate nice 👍

I will be blunt, grammar and structure is all over the place, your descriptions of certain actions/verbs need some polishing and your dialogue needs a massive improvement.

Other than that, damn does this have atmosphere. You've left quite the impression of uneasiness and potential dread, your character perspectives/points of view are decent and several descriptions left to the imagination is straight up horror core. Well done there. Although, don't do it too often (it could lose its charm).

Overall, so much potential but badly needs some polishing. 6/10

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I'm getting better but thank you.

As they say, practice makes prefect.

I'm curious if you have a full picture of Salem?

"It's Salem... Salem Grey,"

rwby?