I'm going to say it before the other person does.
Not a crime

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I just choose to ignore him. He'll lash out but really, if you don't give him attention, then he'll go away, and I'll still be here writing foalcon, as you do

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well, there are terms of use for the site, it wasn't hate

Okay. Not a bad chapter.

Interesting introductions to new characters and the talk with flurry.

Wonder how things will progress??

How will cadence and shining react to their daughter getting with Spike the brave and glorious??

And did spike actually bang twilight, Luna, and Celestia?? Or were those adventures just that, adventures??

Great work so far, and that ending to the chapter is not as bad as you think it it. It's accually quite filling to a start of the friendship problem.

In the story description
One day, while visiting her aunt Twily, the cutie map summons Flurry and Flurry alone to the far reaches of Equestria.
Wow, both of them?

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I know your other comment is a bit more important than this, but grammer is the one thing I will push back on. "Flurry, and Flurry" would imply that there are two flurrys, while "Flurry and Flurry" implies that there is one flurry who will have some detail about them in the next line. Flurry and Flurry alone is akin to her and her alone.

Also, I know Twilight was being rude, but plot and stuff. Besides, they get along better once they start fucking.

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How's writing going?

I am enjoying this so far. I don't like how much of a brat Flurry is but otherwise a good story

Very interested in the next chapter! Can’t wait