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So. Ember has entered the story. Will she rise to power?
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Inevitability she will be getting laid with Jon, or so the tag implies. As to power, maybe…
I like the Reader; he's like if Rodrik Harlaw impersonated Seath.
Also, I'm thinking on how Gilda enters the story, due to it being tagged. Since we just saw mention of 'vengeful Griffons' potentially killing Grimclaw, I wonder if Ember first seeks out and finds Gilda, not Jon, to learn how to defeat Dragons.
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You've read the books!
Yes, the Reader is a reference to Rodrik 'the Reader' Harlaw of the Iron Islands, and Ember has a bit of Asha (Yara) Greyjoy in her. Thorax has a bit of Sam, at least initially.
The tagged characters are some of the major POVs, and they will interact heavily as the story plays out.
The OC offer is still on the table.
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Ah, the tagged bit makes a lot of sense, POV-wise. Thanks for the clarification.
I like how you're setting things up, all these different perspectives could make a story messy but they all flow naturally into the next. It's making the story feel like it's introducing all the pieces in a grand chess game. Tracking!
I can't wait to read what happens next, keep up the good work.
Really good chapter today.
Poor R̶h̶e̶a̶n̶y̶r̶a̶ Ember. Looks like her father & the other dragons are really trying to downgrade her one way or another.
But Ember being Ember, will not allow that to happen,even if means that she has to hurt herself to prove it.