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Oh poor Luna, youre gonna say that sentence so often.
great chapter
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thank you, you're the only reason i still have self esteem
Thx for the chapter
question I dont completly rememebr but timberwolfs were linked to zap apples right. it kinda seemed that the zap apples were an everfree thing and might have been deeply connected to it so now with the everfrees core in the protagenet then wouldent the zap apples no longer grow?
Could even lead to some kind of debuff to the apples in genrel as appljack and her family have been eating zap apples pretty much all their lives since it was granny smith who found them. Maby applejack and the other apples start to not feel as strong as they were
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Thank you very much!
I almost forgot, I'm going to take it into account, but we're just entering season 2, there's still a bit left for that, what I can tell you is that what I plan will be brutal
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three things come to me when i think of what the concequinces could be for what could happen to everfree apart from zap apples not growing
1) poison joke begins to spread un contained now
2) that tree virus zecora got vanishes or has a surge in cases (i belive in another story applejacks parents were effected by that so you could introduce chaos into the world by ponys who should be dead comming back)
3) unless the everfree came out of nowere it was likely there for a reason. maby a seal for something worse? That now has no everfree to stop it
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they are all valid points, which makes me wonder
Why are there so few stories related to the power of Everfree? I think at least it's an interesting topic
Secondly, I must remember that Twilight said that there will be "long-term" consequences.
What you say could happen if given the time, but I have my own plans, also, the deer keep an eye on the forest, which, although it does not solve the problem, does mitigate it enough
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the way i see it the everfree was a cradle for the creatures and flora it made or came about from its magic. without the everfree existing as it had then maby the animals and creatures both migrate and begin to change. timberwolve evolution is something your mc has made so maby some wild timberwolves are doing it too
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Certainly, but it's still too early for anything to happen, without someone driving change, like with the Timberwolves, things will take a long time.
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maby you could make a short "everfree scout report" every few chapters to mark when changes happen storywise. like if the mc met up with and connected with half the remaining timberwolves then before the next chapter you could have a report that the scout sent talking about how all the timberwolves that were nearby are gone and then maby also something else of note.
it would also give you a chance to keep a feeling of the world changing around the mc and the mc not being the pure driving force and also give a feel of time passing. you could redact the dates if you wanted to make it a mystery when they were aswell and just do them when you felt like it
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I'm going to need you to explain to me why you haven't written your own story yet, just with this conversation I already think you're better than me
I also already have something like this, the chapters with decimals, like 10.5 or something like that, I use them to give the point of view of the 6 seas, celestia, Luna, someone random, etc. as the story progresses there will be more
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i have not written a story due to my lack of attention span and other personal things. In finishing uni atm and struggle to try and do my dissertation
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Studies are quite demanding, I've had it difficult too, but writing is something you do for fun and when you have time, I don't know if you noticed that I didn't post anything for a whole month, it was partly because I was very busy, but also because I just didn't feel like it
This is not a job or homework, it's just for fun, see if you like it and if not, leave it nobody will criticize you.
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I do enjoy reading others storys and likely will try to write something again soon but currently its a no go. i did write a short story in the past when i was given a creative writing assignment a while back i enjoyed and learned i quite enjoyed writing little spooky things so might try that
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I'll wait, don't forget to have fun, bye
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something interesting i think about your story is that in the first chapter the everfree tree calls the tree of harmony its older sibling doesnt it? it implyes they had the same parents and was made after the tree of harmony. The thing that runs through my mind with that is the question of if the pillers made the tree of harmony then that implyes they made the tree of everfree aswell. doesnt seem it was intentinal but since magic likes opposing forces i guess the tree of harmony might have sparked a opposite or complementery force of nature.
This could also mean that the mc now is the grandaughter of starswirl and his freinds
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uma dedução excelente, porem também foi mencionado que o everfree esteve presente antes mesmo de qualquer ser até mesmo de discórdia