I must say I really enjoy the premise of this story. True, the whole pre-End Day pony in the Wasteland have been done before though the dash of history mixed maxes Aria just that more interesting. I hope we get to see more of both her past as well as more about her family, both present and past.

Either way, good work. It's an enjoyable read!

1413756 Thank you. I'm glad you enjoy it and yes, you will see a lot more about her past, her family, and the reason why she survived and ended up in the future. Chapter 3 really starts the clues and the story rolling with the introduction of the first of seven major characters so I've already started working on it. Hopefully it should be finished and ready for editing by Monday, Tuesday at the latest. Then it's just up to me and my pre-reader to get it out to y'all.

I have to say I called it knew Melody would leave with Aria, good chapter again anyways really good looking towards the next

The minute you said that melody was A: Good with her wings, and B: Good with tech, I knew she was going with.

Anyway, tis a good read, this. Please, continue.

1455944 One day or two hundred years, but who's counting. Also, if your read some of the stuff in FO:E, a lot of stuff happens to Littlepip in just one day. And remember, Aria did blow up over the whole 'They're friends' thing. Anyway, the whole Melody being related to Silver Star thing gets addressed in the next chapter so stay tuned.

Loving it so far, but there are a few minor spelling/grammar issues scattered here and there. Minor stuff, but they do pop out and kind of break the flow a bit.

Keep up the great work, though as I am expecting another chapter in a day. It better be a day. I can't wait any longer

1491198 It should hopefully be a day. I'm just waiting for my pre-reader to finish his edits, do said edits, and then get Chapter 3 up and out to you fine folks. Lot of stuff happens, btw. We're looking at 21,500+ words for the chapter and who knows if that'll increase during the final rewrites. Should be Tuesday, Wednesday at the latest. Also, thanks for the favorite.

1491326 Yes! Prediction powers are still a-go! Can't wait. Love me some well-written Fo:E Spin-offs and this is definitely well written and interesting.

err, there's a few errors still :(. I can't read the first few sentences of the letter about the dress. And it's written wrong if i can.
Can i help?

Don't worry, you're not missing much. No whip cream fights or make out sessions here. Just boring eggheads talking about nerdy pursuits.

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(Is that really what stallions think girls do at slumber parties?)

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