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Well, I for one, am enjoying this. It's rare when a fallout equestria spin off comes off as good, but this seems to have a good feel so far. I like it, and look forward to seeing where it goes. I'll read chapter 1 later, as it's 4AM and I am tired. Until then: dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cloudchaser_dealwithit.png
Spotted that mistake in the prologue. Cut the 'the'.
This is pretty good so far, mind you I've only read the prologue. I'd advise you to break up some of your paragraphs a little bit more. They just seem to get pretty long and meandering from time to time.
Welp, finally got my lazy butt to read this.
The Lighting Charge. Anyone else notice it's similarity to the Vanguards of Mass Effect's Biotic Charge or the Cabal Vanguard's Poison Strike?
Oh, and I like this story very, very much. Let's keep reading...
It took me a while to start reading this.
"Related/Befriended with/to Luna" tends to be a positively massive "don't read" flag for me. I blame the french recession ...and past experiences.
So far it seems pretty good, however. It's nice to see when an author can handle something so precarious in terms of setup and the premise of this story could have been mishandled very, very easily.
I very much dislike this protagonist's attitude, angstywhining and their backstory from what I've read in this chapter, and practically the only thing I did like was that they were young and tiny. I'm a little surprised how much time I spent kinda just wanting to punch them.
But it's also a first chapter. I've had other fics that had first chapters I hated that I later grew to enjoy. Maybe this'll be another one of those. I'll give it until end of chapter 4 to change my mind, and then figure out if I'll keep reading then.