So, Twilight is the bigger mistress now? She says she wants to reform them, but that last bit suggests Sunset's as much in her control as she was at the Siren's. Unless I'm reading it wrong.
Story still incomplete so we either get a revenge fuck from Sunset and the others on the Sirens, or just Twilight taking charge.
This is what I was hoping for. So many srories go the easy route of having the sirens win in this kind of scenario. Its really nice and hot to see Sci-twi beat them at their own game like this.
Noice! If you're interested, I'd like to see a fic where Sci-Twi brainwashes the Shadowbolts, either before or after the Friendship Games, mainly through scientific ways. She gets the idea from seeing a documentary that focused on hypnosis and brainwashing.
After enslaving the Shadowbolts, she decides to see how hypnosis would interact with magic, via using it on the Rainbooms.
Thinking it over, I'm not as turned off this story as I was. I just prefer the "bad guys win" ending for this kind of NSFW story. But I can acknowledge that's solely personal preference, and the writing really is top-knotch. The author clearly put loads of work into this, and it shows.
So, Twilight is the bigger mistress now? She says she wants to reform them, but that last bit suggests Sunset's as much in her control as she was at the Siren's. Unless I'm reading it wrong.
Story still incomplete so we either get a revenge fuck from Sunset and the others on the Sirens, or just Twilight taking charge.
Not... really what I was hoping for. Been good up to this point, but I guess this story just isn't for me. The writing is high quality though.
Definitely a route I'm glad this was taking.
This is what I was hoping for. So many srories go the easy route of having the sirens win in this kind of scenario. Its really nice and hot to see Sci-twi beat them at their own game like this.
Noice! If you're interested, I'd like to see a fic where Sci-Twi brainwashes the Shadowbolts, either before or after the Friendship Games, mainly through scientific ways. She gets the idea from seeing a documentary that focused on hypnosis and brainwashing.
After enslaving the Shadowbolts, she decides to see how hypnosis would interact with magic, via using it on the Rainbooms.
A chapter nocely done! Loving it how Twilight is dealing with the sirens here.
Undone by their own hubris. I love it.
My guess was right this how Twilight make Sunset betray Siren now the question is Twilight gonna be new mistress or she just save her friends
Clever girl, I hope she manages to save her pony counterpart.
hate for a siren-controlled person to get back to Equestria.
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You would like Her Way With Words by Citrus Recluse, if you haven't read it already. They're a brilliant author
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Thanks for the recommendation!
Thinking it over, I'm not as turned off this story as I was. I just prefer the "bad guys win" ending for this kind of NSFW story. But I can acknowledge that's solely personal preference, and the writing really is top-knotch. The author clearly put loads of work into this, and it shows.
Looks like science beats sorcery this round.
Minor typo -- check three times.
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Fixed, danke~