Rainbow Dash had returned to normal after the Sonic Rainboom. The extra long mane and tail, the colorful wings, the body decals, had all disappeared. She was just her ordinary awesome self again.
And she was holding Heartless, gently flapping her wings to keep them both suspended in the air.
Heartless had changed too. Her body had become deathly pale—looking and feeling like ash in Rainbow Dash’s hooves. Her bright pink coloring was gone, her sparkling mane faded, her eyes dull and empty, reflecting nothing. The big red Cutie Mark on her flank, the eye-catching heart, had lost its black outline and was faded as well. The only thing that told Rainbow Dash she was still alive was the steady thump, thump, thump that Rainbow Dash could feel from her heart now that she held her close.
And Heartless blinked, first looking up at Rainbow Dash with sadness and confusion, and then holding up her hooves in front of her face and blinking once more. There were cracks in her hooves, small pieces of her breaking off into dust, and beneath seemed to be all dust too.
“What’s happening to me?” Heartless whispered.
Rainbow Dash looked at her in a struggle to speak before she at last answered.
“I… I think you’re dying.”
“Dying?” Heartless blinked—and to Rainbow’s surprise a pair of real tears, not dust, came from Heartless’s eyes and left trails down her face. Lingering confusion and fear was visible to Rainbow Dash. “But how can I die? I don’t even know what I am.”
Rainbow Dash grimaced and bit her lip, unsure of how to respond. Heartless didn’t feel cold in her hooves—she didn’t feel like anything. She hardly weighed anything either, feeling like an empty shell of a pony. She then dropped her hooves and let her head rest against Rainbow’s body. More small cracks like those of incredibly dry ground cracking and breaking started to spread over her body.
Heartless closed her eyes as she limply rested where she was, it was certain she’d fall to the ground if Rainbow Dash wasn’t carrying her.
“I’m scared, Rainbow Dash.”
That brought a surge of emotion through Rainbow but she held her tongue. Her hooves clenched and she almost screamed at the pony in her grip. Even Rainbow wasn’t entirely sure how she felt anymore. What right did Heartless have to feel fear and be held like this? What right did she have to cry? Everything she had done, all those she had killed without any consideration or hesitation, without remembering any of them. It made Rainbow Dash so angry, angry enough that she wanted to yell and tell the pony she deserved to be scared, deserved even far worse than that and what was happening to her now. But she couldn’t. With the anger was also sorrow, regret, and while not exactly compassion or sympathy flooded her veins there was still a part of her that wished things could’ve ended happily.
This pony she was holding. She was a monster, she was something Rainbow Dash didn’t understand either. She was someone Rainbow couldn’t save completely. She was someone who never really seemed to understand what she was doing, like the others had said. It made her different. Scarier in some ways, pitiable in others. And that was finally what Rainbow Dash realized. Would her friends have wanted to help her too? Would they be upset that a better outcome couldn’t be reached? Would they think Heartless deserved forgiveness or to be helped?
Instead of saying anything, Rainbow Dash only sighed and held Heartless close. It was over anyways.
She just hoped that Heartless understood now… felt what Rainbow Dash was trying to make her feel. If she did, it could help her rest peacefully.
There wasn’t a single cloud anywhere around them thanks to her Sonic Rainboom. Just the sun above as it shined down on the two of them. It made Rainbow Dash warm but it didn’t change the lack of feeling from Heartless’s body. The day, just like Rainbow Dash had noticed on her approach, was still beautiful.
She even heard birds tweeting in the jungle below, something that had been absent before.
The pale pony had grown even more faded, and felt even lighter. Rainbow Dash watched as bits of her mane and tail, her back, and the bottom of her hooves all started to crack and fall away, carried on the breeze. Cracks had appeared all around her Cutie Mark and soon it peeled away too. Heartless’s entire body was crumbling to dust.
“It’s okay,” Rainbow Dash found herself saying in an attempt to comfort the other mare. “I don’t think you’ll need to be scared anymore.”
Heartless opened up her eyes again, eyes that used to sparkle above a face that normally had such a happy smile on it. Instead now she was blank. Empty. With just the slightest imprint of sorrow visible on her features. Her ears and the sides of her face were falling away, her chin, the back of her head… Rainbow Dash knew it wouldn’t be much longer.
Heartless seemed to know that too as she looked into Rainbow’s eyes.
“Can you hold me? Just like this?”
Rainbow Dash nodded. “Yeah. Yeah… I’ll keep holding you.”
Heartless closed her eyes and returned to merely resting against Rainbow Dash while more and more of her fell away.
A small smile returned to her face.
“I remember this. This feeling. Being held like this… it’s the first thing I can remember,” Heartless said calmly, peacefully. Quietly. She nestled further into Rainbow Dash as her back legs completely crumbled into dust and most of the rest of her body soon followed. “I like it… Rainbow Dash… you’re… warm...”
A final sound of cracking and crumbling before there was silence and Rainbow Dash’s hooves were empty.
She looked on as the last remnants of dust blew away in the wind, scattered through the sky.
“Goodbye, Heart-,” she stopped. “Goodbye, Full Heart.”
Great chapters!
Great story arc!
Fantastic work man, it's a ton of work. Very fun adventures.
I'm looking forward to the last few chapters and this was a great story.
I'm quite satisfied with the way that fight ended.
Ain't that the truth. I started this at the beginning of Rainbow's journey just a few months ago, technically part of the same story, caught up and crammed in all the rest of the currently-written fics for this universe, and now here were are finally at the end. It's been one heck of a world trip.
And there's still a couple more stories yet to come! (hopefully🤞)
That's really interesting. I don't know a whole lot about the Major Arcana so I definitely wouldn't have put this together. I just now read over the desciptions of them to get an idea of what you were aiming for.
One that particularly stuck out to me was The Tower and Dreamweaver. Hoofica was probably my favorite arc next to the Grand Ocean. Towards the later parts of the arc and definitely at the climax of it I was getting similar vibes to The Tower of Doctor Zalost from Courage the Cowardly Dog, which also shares some similar themes of despair and depression. I recall you mentioning in another post somewhere that you took some inspiration from older cartoons in your writing, one of them being Courage, and I was wondering if that episode was at all inspiration for Hoofica. Having looked at the description/symbolism of the Tower card I'm wondering now if that card might have further back reaches and inspired John Dillworth to write that episode. Some deep food for thought.
Maybe, I suppose. I see the point you're trying to make here and yeah, seeing all these amazing locales get fleshed out with smaller details of daily life would've been pretty cool. You've done some great worldbuilding across these stories. As far as getting the story going though I'd argue that they were long enough.
Although I wouldn't have minded a bit more spicing up on True Pegasus and Hoofica but that's because I'm biased towards Pegasus culture and just really liking the Hoofica arc.
And they're my faves.
It was right up to this point where I started thinking harder about Heartless and changing my opinion on her. That dialog they had in the calm right before the fight was really impactful. Again, I'm satisfied with how this turned out.
1) Uh...well alright then, I guess...
2) Pretty sure a lot of people who read this were pretty close to shipping Barnaby and Rainbow Dash at the Oreville arc.
3) I'd say you did really well within the bounds of T-rated to make this work.
Thanks for the great story! Now go post and go sleep.
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Both stories are fully planned out but I have not yet written a single word of them and don't know when I'll start or when they'll be published. But I will write them.
And so she finally found peace