I was going to lay down. I was.

Then this was updated.

i wonder if they'll need to add gems into sunsets diet soon? if my guesses on the origin of that transformation are correct.

Uh oh, Celestia’s getting attached already… I think Luna would remind Celestia that Sunset is someone’s or (somepony) else’s daughter. I have a feeling Luna has already guessed the truth

Well that's unexpected. What else happens when an alpha is in rage? Because that looks considerably more dangerous than enhanced reflexes, strength and natural weapons

This is going to get really awkward when Sunset meets her mom again

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Spoiler tags for minor spoilage:

This is going to get really awkward when Sunset meets her mom again

This is a thing that's already kinda plotted out in the story, so definitely keep an eye out for it.

I have a feeling Luna has already guessed the truth

(human)Luna won't have, but will feel kinda stupid when they do find out. She has the disadvantage of:

1. Never having met the princess, and
2. Being too reliant on scent signatures to make the connection

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Separate topic is separate:

Well that's unexpected. What else happens when an alpha is in rage? Because that looks considerably more dangerous than enhanced reflexes, strength and natural weapons

Not much more than already mentioned, aside from an increased chance of going feral (more on that later in the story). Sunset is a special case, obviously.

By the way, gotta aprove the implied AppleDashery & RD as an Omega, likely bratty, fits her to a T
Won't deny I expected a full reversal with Fluttershy, putting her as an alpha, but I do agree it's very much not what one would expect of her.

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By the way, gotta aprove the implied AppleDashery & RD as an Omega, likely bratty, fits her to a T
Won't deny I expected a full reversal with Fluttershy, putting her as an alpha, but I do agree it's very much not what one would expect of her.

Oh, yes. Rainbow is a bratty bottom and I've only ever read ONE fic that could convince me otherwise.

As far as Fluttershy goes, I don't know why more people don't see her as a soft Domme, especially given all her traits that point straight at that archetype. Does (canon, pony)Fluttershy have more anxieties than a whole flock of submissive brats with a praise kink? Absolutely. Is (canon,human)Fluttershy a bag of insecurities and sass that most people miss because she's so reserved? Undoubtedly. But BOTH canon representations of her character have A Point Which One Does Not Cross, or Momma Shy Isn't Mad, She's Just Disappointed..

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It was worth it though. All that cuteness. Ugh. So worth.

I'm not usually a fan of Alpha/Beta/Omega dynamics, but there are a few lampshades and subversion in here that help me enjoy this story! Good on EQG Celestia in this AU for laying down the law, too!

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It says something about the genre that just basic world-building so that everything is logically consistent with a functional world/ecosystem/culture/etc. would be considered subverting the genre. And yeah, don't get me wrong, I'm mostly interested in the "subversion" stuff, too, mostly because I always feel smut for its own sake is just such a waste of story.

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Thank you. Honestly, you're a good writer and I love this.

Smut for the sake of smut can be indeed dull.

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Got me interested. Added to my read list. Looking forward to reading more of this story.

Dumb question.
Do you have an idea on when chapter 4 will be ready?

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Once I get LLW Ch. 13 out (goal of by end-of-week this week), Deviation Ch. 4 (and ch. 5, too!) should be out within the next two weeks of that.

TLost Little Wolf

• MLP: FiM
• Drama

Yet another human-in-the-body-of-a-show-character story

• Sex
• Gore
• Human
• Alt. Universe
• Other
• Chrysalis

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I'm guessing that Sunset Papa maybe a dragon🤣