Ash shook his head “No, one should be bullied just for different from the rest. So, what are y’all’s names?”

You should delete that comma.

Steel Wind wrapped his arm around Ash’s shoulders “How, many times are you gonna defend people? First he princess and now three kids. What’s next? A whole village?”

Same here.

Both of them were shaking “It’s an Ursa Major!” They both then ran off with shrieks and screams.

I was about to say the ursa minor/major thing, but you changed it to major and colossal. There's an alternate universe tag so I can't say anything