Don’t get me wrong it’s a interesting story but this shining and cadence trope is getting old fast shining the asshat treating Candace like a toy or item and always so over the top aggressive with the MC thankfully not in this one with the over top aggressive to the MC. and cadence falling for another for one reason or another always having to do with how shining treats her, besides the one time in a FoE setting where he died but she took a few months to move on before falling in love or admitting it to the MC witch is more relatable. anyways this trope is tiresome an old and getting kinda tired of seeing it. Other then that again it’s a fairly interesting story so far, no major like or dislike to it yet to warrant a like an fav or dislike and moving on to another story. If we get an everybody wins scenario including chrysalis next chapter I could be able to deal with this trope a bit better in this story but that’s a big if kinda hoping ya do give us an everybody wins scenario here and I feel that may be the make or break point on this story for me cause honestly we never really get to see a chrysalis and pony win for a story that is usually already far off the shows timeline sometimes we do but it happens so rarely it kinda sucks, but ya I feel it’s a everybody wins or this story is over for me next chapter cause this shining & cadence trope is once again getting old an tiresome even more so when he isn’t made out to be the bad guy with the MC and all.
Overall your on an interesting ablit thin line to how this goes so I shall say this, good luck it’s your story so do what ya will and if I come to not like it then shit oh well Tis my preference and thus I move on and wish ya good luck with your story if I do like it well then Hot Dog this is great, as an author ya can’t satisfy everyone’s wants and likes that’s just the nature of writing so I wish ya luck on whatever path ya take here!
11184397 Understandable everyone has their reasons but I’ve seen that trope too often lately I’m sick of it and sadly your story may be the breaking point for it. As I said this is your story so you do what YOU want as you can’t satisfy everyone’s likes and again I wish you luck with whatever path you take.
Once again I think I’d be able to deal with it if we get an everybody wins scenario here including chrysalis cause I haven’t see once of those in far too long and that may be what keeps me in this story, however I want to emphasize that this is YOUR story so you do what you want don’t let what I want influence how it goes for I am simply stating what I’d LIKE to see not demanding to see. Anyways keep writing mate and enjoy it and we shall see with the next chapter if I remain invested in this story or not. So good luck and keep doing what you love mate!
Don’t get me wrong it’s a interesting story but this shining and cadence trope is getting old fast shining the asshat treating Candace like a toy or item and always so over the top aggressive with the MC
thankfully not in this one with the over top aggressive to the MC.and cadence falling for another for one reason or another always having to do with how shining treats her,besides the one time in a FoE setting where he died but she took a few months to move on before falling in love or admitting it to the MC witch is more relatable.anyways this trope is tiresome an old and getting kinda tired of seeing it. Other then that again it’s a fairly interesting story so far, no major like or dislike to it yet to warrant a like an fav or dislike and moving on to another story. If we get an everybody wins scenario including chrysalis next chapter I could be able to deal with this trope a bit better in this story but that’s a big ifkinda hoping ya do give us an everybody wins scenario hereand I feel that may be the make or break point on this story for me cause honestly we never really get to see a chrysalis and pony win for a story that is usually already far off the shows timeline sometimes we do but it happens so rarely it kinda sucks, but ya I feel it’s a everybody wins or this story is over for me next chapter cause this shining & cadence trope is once again getting old an tiresome even more so when he isn’t made out to be the bad guy with the MC and all.Overall your on an interesting ablit thin line to how this goes so I shall say this, good luck it’s your story so do what ya will and if I come to not like it then shit oh well Tis my preference and thus I move on and wish ya good luck with your story if I do like it well then Hot Dog this is great, as an author ya can’t satisfy everyone’s wants and likes that’s just the nature of writing so I wish ya luck on whatever path ya take here!
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I mostly wrote Shining as a bad man because I never favored him in the first place. I always found him annoying for a reason I can’t place.
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Understandable everyone has their reasons but I’ve seen that trope too often lately I’m sick of it and sadly your story may be the breaking point for it. As I said this is your story so you do what YOU want as you can’t satisfy everyone’s likes and again I wish you luck with whatever path you take.
Once again I think I’d be able to deal with it if we get an everybody wins scenario here including chrysalis cause I haven’t see once of those in far too long and that may be what keeps me in this story, however I want to emphasize that this is YOUR story so you do what you want don’t let what I want influence how it goes for I am simply stating what I’d LIKE to see not demanding to see. Anyways keep writing mate and enjoy it and we shall see with the next chapter if I remain invested in this story or not. So good luck and keep doing what you love mate!