You need an editor. You've got a good concept going, but it's very clear English is not your first language. It's going to make a lot of people not want to read it.
Iām currently looking for one. But I doubt that I will get one soon. And you are right, English is not my first language, but that wonāt stop me. Thank you for reading and suggestion.
Yes, but Anon does not control other ponies work. He only āsupervisesā that everything is going as planned and everyone is doing their jobs. Like a field agent. Spring Stone (Anons boss) controls how the work is handled. So she is both owner and foreman, at least I think so.
Thanks for the tip. I will expand it more when I have the chance.
11192111 I'd say most Human in Equestria stories only have one human, and #anon also applies to Anonymous in pony forms, such as anonfilly, where #human would not be implied
Vauria is right about adding Human tag to this story, IMO.
Grammarly will help you make this nice story look more polished, mainly by helping you with proper word order. In any case, if you need help with it, I could assist you from time to time. PM me if you're interested.
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You need an editor. You've got a good concept going, but it's very clear English is not your first language. It's going to make a lot of people not want to read it.
Congratz, ya got featured! A few days in a row too! (Midnight as I write this, so two days in my book! š) 3/20/2022
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Iām currently looking for one. But I doubt that I will get one soon. And you are right, English is not my first language, but that wonāt stop me. Thank you for reading and suggestion.
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I donāt even know how that happened. I wanted to create something original myself. It is nice to see that many people who actually enjoy it.
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Iām still working on it. Hopefully I can improve fast. Thanks for reading!
11186568 Yup!
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What?
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How would you react when your mentor was talking to you about times she had sex? Espacially when she's close to your mother?
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Iām already using a similar tool called: Language tool.
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Googled it and it turns out Iām a jerk. Sorry about that.
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No need to apologize. Thanks for the feedback.
Ok, ive caught up and Im going to follow this. Well done.
Monk
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Yes, but Anon does not control other ponies work. He only āsupervisesā that everything is going as planned and everyone is doing their jobs. Like a field agent. Spring Stone (Anons boss) controls how the work is handled. So she is both owner and foreman, at least I think so.
Thanks for the tip. I will expand it more when I have the chance.
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Ty!
Please tag human
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Human tag is mostly used in referring to Equestria girls and converting the world into humans that are either anthropomorphic or regular humans.
This story consists only one human. Anonymous, and thou it would be weird to tag it additionally when I have already acquired the #Anon Tag.
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I'd say most Human in Equestria stories only have one human, and #anon also applies to Anonymous in pony forms, such as anonfilly, where #human would not be implied
Vauria is right about adding Human tag to this story, IMO.
Grammarly will help you make this nice story look more polished, mainly by helping you with proper word order. In any case, if you need help with it, I could assist you from time to time. PM me if you're interested.
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Alright. I will add it then.
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Iām using a similar tool called language tool. But I will check it out as well. Thanks.