It's a good start, but this first chapter would benefit from an editor or prereader to correct grammar errors. If you want, check out the Looking for Editors group.
Not virgin in the literal sense. Virgin in the sense that I'm new to writing so I'm sorry for any mistakes that may be done and please don't be too harsh on me. Are my jokes really that hard to get? Like seriously i was pretty sure everyone will understand the virgin joke.
This is definitely going to be a different kind of story.
Thanks And yeah there aren't all that many twiarmordance stories out there (believe me i've searched for one and haven't been able to find one) so i decided if the internet doesn't give you what you want then you go and put it on the internet yourself. And that's how this story was born.
11091009 Same with my Sunset Shimmer story. To read the kind of story I want. I have to write it. C.S. Lewis snd J.R.R Tolkien had to do the same thing.
What does that have to do with anything?
It's a good start, but this first chapter would benefit from an editor or prereader to correct grammar errors. If you want, check out the Looking for Editors group.
Interesting start. This is definitely going to be a different kind of story.
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Not virgin in the literal sense. Virgin in the sense that I'm new to writing so I'm sorry for any mistakes that may be done and please don't be too harsh on me. Are my jokes really that hard to get? Like seriously i was pretty sure everyone will understand the virgin joke.
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Thanks for the tip
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And yeah there aren't all that many twiarmordance stories out there (believe me i've searched for one and haven't been able to find one) so i decided if the internet doesn't give you what you want then you go and put it on the internet yourself. And that's how this story was born.
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Same with my Sunset Shimmer story. To read the kind of story I want. I have to write it. C.S. Lewis snd J.R.R
Tolkien had to do the same thing.
Man, that first chapter is definitely in the need of an editor. Spelling mistakes and pronoun errors abound.
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I don't have an editor as of now but i would appreciate some feedback comments
11091009 Wait, seriously? You'd think there'd be tons of stories featuring those three in a threesome.