The Main 7 encounter a series of bullies set on coaxing them out of their clothes and into their beds.
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Just a fun idea I had for a short, and wrote in a single night to show some of the aftermath of Rainbow Dash, which hasn't been covered well so far. Been feeling like I should do more of these short chapters lately instead of my usual 8k+ words. Those things take forever to make.
Still working on moving into the main climax of this story with Sunset Shimmer as the finale.
Kinda still want to see the full first breaking in of Rainbow Dash.
And also it would be kind of poetic justice, and fun to read, if Gilda ends up eventually being sold of as just another piece of meat like the rest.
Hm, so there's clearly a supernatural element to this one...the Memory Stone, maybe? Because other than Sunset's geode, that seems like the only mind-affecting magic in Equestria Girls (notwithstanding temporary psychosis from overusing magic).
That said, it's a great chapter either way!
Not gonna lie, even though it's the least likely route for the story to take (especially after this chapter), I can't say I'm not hoping that things somehow turn around for the girls and they all get out of this situation
More dashie yay
After this chapter I’m just like… Please, please, please… Give give this story both a good and a bad end!
This could have potential with the other girls maybe a threesome, could be used to trick fluttershy even more and get rainbow dash to unwittingly betray her loyalty
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This short chapter was incredibly hot~! Would love to see more Dashie scenes though~
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I'm with you on this. That said I'm not sure AJ and Rarity's ending would be different either way.
I'm still disappointed that we really didn't see the event itself this at least brought Dash back.
Sunset will be the trick on how ya get her. Mess that up and everything falls apart.
This is a pretty enjoyable story of this kind, though personally I'd love to see a chapter where Fluttershy has to deal with several males at once or has to go through some intense stimulating session with her trainer, like being blindfolded, restrained and teased with toys and some other items, like feathers, brushes, whipped cream etc.
Think you could squeeze in a chapter like that?
So if this some magical item, like the Memory Stone, or even some "classic" hypnosis app seen in other hentai medias, then this could answer one question.
When Fluttershy was texting Twilight and Rainbow Dash, they were behaving differently. At first, I figured the bullies simply took their phones, but from this new information, it leads me to believe they were in some primal, slutty bimbo state.
Though this also begs the question, why not just put Rainbow under effect and have her quit all the sports teams? Or is it more cruel to force her to do it?
But I do agree with
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I want to see a Good and Bad ending to this.
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I wrote this chapter as more a joke that this bully is so good at manipulating women he even gets a girl who clearly hates him to do what he wants and not even Rainbow realizes what's going on. The cuts are supposed to drive home that point.
I thought about adding some magical influence in the story, but thought it would cheapen the payoff if it made things to easy. I honestly don't find the traditional concept of bimbos that hot, the actual clop is much more rewarding if they have to work for it, rather than handed to them easily.
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Okay, that does set my mind at ease. So it's purely psychological and nothing mystical whatsoever. If anything this "joke" chapter gave the reader a lot of insight. I still look forward to how the rest of this series will play out my friend
I'll admit, the smaller scale chapters like this are definitely my personal preference compared to the scope of the last one—just a girl sliding into slow oblivion with some sleazebag one on one.
A delightful little sample~!
You should make a chapter where it shows what happened to fluttershy on the yacht
It's like an Instant Loss 2-koma but in written form, I loved this, great chapter.
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I can't help but feel bad for what's happening to Fluttershy and her friends in this story. I kinda hope the bullies get their comeuppance in the end.
This fic continues to impress with great depravity, please keep the good times rolling.
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Agreed.
Also fuck you hoops.
Hopefully the police or school board finds out about this little slanessh worshiper.
If not then I will go into this fic myself and cut off his geneseed myself
Rainbow Dash completely destroying her future to be Hoop's housewife is my favourite chapter so far.