The Main 7 encounter a series of bullies set on coaxing them out of their clothes and into their beds.
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The concept for this chapter probably had the most revisions before being made than anything else I've written. Hard to settle on these ideas that need to seem interesting enough to me to even have a chance of being finished.
Thankfully, it also leads into our next victim in the following chapter: Applejack.
11269303 I'd say it turned out well, as the multiple shifts in perspective helped to keep things fresh; while Fluttershy seems like the easiest one to write for, staying with her and Score for too long runs the risk of retreading old (albeit sexy) ground.
That said, Rarity's deciding that she'd prove to "Fluttershy" that Jet Set would cheat on her seemed like a bit of a stretch, if for no other reason than she doesn't seem dumb enough to do something like that alone. So Applejack following along is a nice nod toward her acting in character (plus the added appeal of turning lesbians into a guy's sex pets). Though I do wonder how you'll deal with them having the magic of their geodes
ifwhen Jet Set starts going outside of their comfort zone? Between Rarity's crystals and Applejack's strength, they're not really something that can be ignored.EDIT: This was meant to be posted in reaction to part 1; I didn't even realize that part 2 was out!
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Can you think up of any story the has the girls beat up the people bulling them?
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I read a crossover with Fairly Oddparents where some of them (and EG Gilda) did just that to the Sirens.
I'm loving it~!
Now I feel bad for Shady. I hope he saves up enough money to hire the Crystal Prep girls properly.
Going good! I definitely agree that Fluttershy's scenes are the best, so I'm not at all mad that she took half of Rarity's first chapter. The fact that she's actually clueless and willingly going along with Score's perversities is what really makes it special. With the other girls it's much closer to outright non-con.
Twilight's scenes are the most similar to Fluttershy in that respect, since she also has a (big) dash of naivety to her. And the idea of putting her in a cage appeals to me very deeply as well, especially with all those lewd accessories. I feel like Royal Pin could still train her to be a truly obedient pet. Maybe they'll have Fluttershy record an encouraging video for her, where she talks directly to Twilight and shows that she's just as much of a slut?
I also loved the fun little details, like Indigo Zap holding Fluttershy's phone between her thighs and getting off from Rainbow's worried messages. Neat idea! The scene with Fluttershy carrying her pink wallet in her mouth to give it to Score was really good as well, as was the part where he holds her student card in front of her jizz-covered face. Paints a nice little picture.
Now I just can't wait for new chapters, especially ones with Fluttershy and Twilight!
lmao, it was so random and stupid I love it. Shady must've had quite a workout.
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i kinda want to that be how pinkie pie get taken, they use fluttershy to convince her it is normal and encourage her to take part in a special party