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ahhhh, fuuuuUUUUUUU-
Noooooo, spike my boy! Don’t worry dean will help you and kick her ass. Or so help me Celestia and Luna I will go through this screen or portal to that world and kick her ass myself.
But hopefully they discover that Former Queen chrysalis/restored killed Cadance instead of the elves.
No matter what universe, life can't seem to give Spike a break. My boy needs some love (and no, clopfics don't count).
You did Spike
SO DAMN DIRTY!
Fuck Chrysalis! Bitch needs a permanent dirt nap!
Now onto the real nitty-gritty!
Before I even talk about the adorableness that is Dean X Twilight, we have to talk about Dean seeming to finally realize just what the fate of his son & wife was. The describition of his wife sounds absolutely horrifying & to see it from his perspective must've been absolutely traumatizing.
The fact that it happened just as we were teased with a kiss between Twilight & Dean (a drunk off his ass one but still) made it seem like the vision of his wife deliberately showed up to prevent him for doing so. It's like his mind is pushing him in two different places. One where he can accept the harsh reality that his wife & child were slain & can move on with Twilight & two, where he never lets it go & continues to let it dominate him, creating an heartbreaking rift between a potential happy life with Twilight.
Him recounting the time he had learned of his loved one's death....Jesus that had have shocked him like hell. I understand why he ran off in fear. I hope everything becomes clear for his rattled mind.
Twilight being left on the dance floor holding back tears.....Fuck dawg! She was so close & yet so far & to no fault of her own.
Go out & getcha man Sparks!
Now to the adorbleness!
Dean dancing with Twilight? 》 CHECK!
Dean & Twilight looking into each other's eyes? 》 CHECK!
Dean & Twilight's teasing kiss? 》 CHECK! CHECK! CHECK!
absolute hit of a chapter & I'm sure the next will be even better!
Good luck on your tests! I'll be back whenever there's another upload! 😎
Chrysalis needs to die, painfully. This is the only acceptable outcome, any others are null.
Pretty sure it should read "Now go!" instead of "No Go!"
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Fixed!
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It could be possible, however, the tac pad is set by default to recognize Orithian biology... which is chitinous...
Anywho, we will have to see what happens!!
Damn that kid can never take a break he falls in love with someone and then turned around that person breaks his heart poor bastard.
Ehhh…
Now, don’t get me wrong, I love this story. But the whole “screw over Spike” shtick is pretty overused on this site. He gets screwed over, every. Single. Time.
I at least hope he gets a payoff after this, and puts Dean’s training to use.
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I've been trying to hopefully keep cliches in this story to a minimum. I'll try and keep an eye out for them in the future!
(Also, I'm glad you are enjoying my story!)
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It’s all good! 👍 Please don’t feel like I’m angry or anything, the story is awesome! I just hope Spike gets something is all. Poor drake is getting slapped in fanfiction like he does in the show.
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Thanks! And don't worry, there will be a light at the end of the tunnel for Spike!
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When is the next chapter going to be posted?
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Soon as I am done my school projects and scuba training. So.... likely by the end of next week or weekend.
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okay thank you
I'm not sure what the effects of a concussion combined with PTS is (among other things) but Dean's wife and child's names keep changing. Not sure if it's on purpose or not.
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It was a lack of attention on my part. I kept mixing up Marie and Mary, and sometimes I would forget Dean's son's name. Once I am done the next little bit of the story, I intend on going back and fixing things up.
holy shit
I think you know what is wrong with this line
FUCK YOU CHRYSALIS!!!!