She appeared as if from nowhere, a dark shadowed figure full of dread magic. Shining Armor and Cadance scowled with apprehension, but her attention was on the _other_ shadowy overlord that stood before her. Only one could remain.
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Not really, no. I was expecting to hear what you decided to go with, though. What? Do you think us all to be lusty, perverted degenerates? I much prefer it when things lead naturally into this, but... well... I'm not above abusing smut for the sake of smut if it fits the character. Though, Umbra doesn't strike me like the type to be overly nymphomaniacal. *shrug*
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She's clearly a happy mare today. That counts for something, right? I am trying to imply more happened off camera, not sure how well that came through.
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Dunno how much clearer you could get, outright stating she got laid.
That's not what I was talking about, though. I mean, the last chapter was pretty spicy already, I would actually be surprised to see it continued immediately moving on to this chapter.
Can we all agree that Purple Shine is the real hero of this story?
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She really is doing her utmost best to do good by her lady.
Typos and Happy Accidents happen...
are you sure shining is not reincarnated of an average high school japanese boy who got hit by a truck?
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Some smut would work nicely with the story. Actually enhance it. Just balance smut and plot, and everything will be great!
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Exactly my sentiment from last chapter's "poll". :3
Can't wait for Umbra to surprise Sunset with human's joke upon their first encounter. Too bad, I don't know many memes so I couldn't think of any good ones.
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The only question is, is she Dark Princess of Dorkness or Dork Princess of Darkness?
The only problem i see is unwanted pregnancy. Nothing more
Hm... Shining Armor want to spread the joy of motherhood around? Understandable, even if only for the fun... we all can totally understand him for wanting some Sugar ~♡
Can you have Umbra start singing some Minecraft songs? Like…
And