Very well done!

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Thanks! ^.^ What's your favorite part?

I just realized that over half of the 'similar' stories fimfic lists for this one are mine, lol. Have I fallen into a pattern?

Am very excited to see where this can lead

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It'll be up tomorrow ... though SubscribeStar supporters have had it for a while now!

It seems that you published this story fairly recently despite having written this well over two years ago. Why?

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It only took me a little over 2 years to get around to writing Chapter 2!

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The lists do prefer stories by the same author.

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I liked the comparisons made to similar experiences with Cadence. Also the concept is a fun one. Plus the writing was just good quality overall.

Wow. Perfect. Wow.

Oh dear, this can’t be good. Can’t wait to see Twi take over Cadance a well

I'm placing my bet on the twist; Given the way Cadance is portrayed here, I predict she shape-shifted to mess with him. If I'm wrong, great. If I'm right, that's an excuse for her to force increasingly embarrassing situations on our intrepid hero.

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If the spoiler were true then the tags would contain it (in a spoiler because it's a spoiler). Springing false advertising on the reader would be uncool.

https://www.fimfiction.net/group/211425/sex-magic

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I suspected as much...

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We all know that's where it's going! ^.^

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Heh, yeah ... I'm not going to do that much of a bait and switch on you guys!

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I'm aware of the group, and I'm actually a member... But I thought this story wasn't a very good fit for it. Magic is involved in causing them to have sex, yes, but the magic isn't really involved in the sex any. So I didn't think it would be of much interest to people who wanted magical sex.

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I've achieved perfection?

Huh...

Well, I guess that's it folks. I can wrap this up and go home.

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Unless this is set to be an anthology, and then the spoiler tags would be set up chapter by chapter, indicating that at some point in the near future, Cadance finds out about what's going on, casts a spell to transform herself into Twilight, and rides him like that because he feels bigger when she's smaller and tighter. Totally an option, but I don't think so because having it be actual incest is more likely to result in higher view counts. Rereading the story later drops off significantly more if an actual fetish is made into a facsimile of the same fetish. It's even possible that the author hasn't planned out every chapter yet, or that Cadance told Twilight where to find them and taught her how they work in order to satisfy her desire for a foalcon threesome. That'd be pretty hot.

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It's even possible that the author hasn't planned out every chapter yet

Me? Never!
Most of the time, I never publish a story until it's been completely written already, not just planned out. And even on the few times there were exceptions, I did already have a detailed plan.

(Just think of the horror! If I published chapters as soon as they were done, you'd be waiting more than 2 years between the chapters in this story!)

So cute!

So, after going through all that in one day, he was very ready to just flop on his bed and enjoy the absolute luxury of doing nothing for a while. And soon, sleep. Blessed, blissful sleep.

Fate: "I'm gonna stop you right there!"

“What’s a blowjob?”
Shining choked, as if somepony had just knocked the wind out of him.

Or as is someone just used his throat to give her a demonstration?

He sighed. Well, no way around it now. “How did you even find these coupons?”
“I sensed magic coming from your room, and it felt dangerous, so I thought I’d protect you from it!”

That... is actually kinda cute.
Not that Shining would share that sentiment...

“Now Twiley, we need to talk about the rest of the coupons, okay?”
In response, she only giggled again. Giggling like she had a secret, like she was playing some kind of joke on him. Oh ... that didn’t sound good. He didn’t like the sound of that at all...

An innocent giggle, an evil giggle or an innocently evil giggle?

Good chapter!
I enjoyed reading it.

But wouldn't the coupon technically demand he gives her a blowjob?
That would certainly make things even more interesting...

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But wouldn't the coupon technically demand he gives her a blowjob?

Heh, thankfully, they're not terribly specific about who's giving and who's receiving!

A little mastermind has her brother dancing on her wish list.
Though a gentleman or colt should always repay services provided. It's also way easier to tire her out with a mind-blowing orgasm of her own!
Or two... Or how many are needed to make her tell him where the coupons are all hidden.

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Heh... Fucking her into submission is a good idea. Sounds like a solution Cadance would come up with!