The Forgotten Race
written by The Loner
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What's wrong with the story?
OH! So that's what you meant earlier in the PM.
Hmm, a magical portal within the cave pool?
These early chapters are deeply in need of a "Show, don't tell" rewrite. I can't get into this story because I'm not reading a story, I'm reading a wiki article.
I know this is supposed to be LotR dwarves but I can't help but listen to *that* dwarven guitar.
A black screen filled with letters, numbers and symbols of many colors.
So far so good the story!