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This comment section rules!
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You know, I’ve never had the comments section of a clopfic turn into a discussion about Marine tactics and weapons! Classic. And thanks.
Purrrfection ♡♡♡♡♡
Plot twist: Ibex stole the tech so they get there hooves on the best porn everrr ♡
Every reader enjoying the teamplay here
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Magnificent chapter
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Thats shows that passion can grow everywere. Especially in porn heavy areas were passion flows in rivers ♡
what a cliffhanger lol
I cant wait for Marco to find it on his laptop later after the "hangover"
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Curses, another cliffhanger.
Still a great chapter! Hope there is more soon.
Ah, what the heck? I know I said this isn't really my cup of tea (I sure do miss drinking tea) but this story needs a longpost. I am the one here to give it to you.
It is such a gear shift for me to get back into the human narrative voice. I have, quite literally, 'gone feral' having abandoned this field of writing in exchange for specialization in the four-legged arts.
Ladies and gentleman, this is the man I learned alliteration from. You are still the master, Sensei!
It's a lot of work to be sure but the effort is what separates us from the animals.
Good detail. ESL people will almost always think first in their native language and then a second pass is made in the mind to convert each phrase into english with hangups occuring whenever the brain can't seize upon the proper word. In extremis, it seems very likely his brain would be unwilling to engage the second task at all and would express unfiltered Tagalog in this dude's case.
You still get 10 prestige for circling the globe, even if you weren't the first.
If only our women could be so easy! They all seem to want us to punch them in the face and throw them down a flight of stairs.
Only if they're rated arrrrrrrgh, matey!
Who cares indeed given how terrible most of them are?
(Looks at the also liked stories) Well, hello there, I Feel Pretty!
This sounds like a good thing to me. I like it when she's got a large sailor in her boat. Yo ho ho!
Gilda is on par with her character here! About to start the orgy and still insecure enough to be questioning her lover's motives.
Tara, you should write feral erotica. This is what I've been saying forever.
You take that back, Gilda! Pony mares taste like sugar, spice and everything nice!
People have asked me, "AJA, why do you like feral so much?" And my answer to them is this, "In what universe does a bipedal species not look silly bending over at the waist and shaking their ass?" There is something to be said for casual exposure and deliberate lewdness whilst exposing yourself as well, while standing on four legs.
Ahh, I miss using 'pucker'. That was always a goldie.
This is a minor nitpick but "began eating her out" flows better.
I may be rusty on my lore but why is Marco referring to Earth as Terra?
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You know what? I'm going to steal this amazing concept and repurpose it for the story I'm working on with Roseluck's sister playing the role of Giraldi and Roseluck playing the role of Gilda. This thing you got going on here is too good not to use myself.
I got a feeling he's going to pay him back. Maybe it's just me.
Gilda is so ornery! Prune juice, extra large for this gal!
I totally got this from you. Or maybe you got this from me? At this point, I can't even say! Regardless, the trembling lady legs are something I employ a lot.
What an excellent use of the word "superlative"! I'll need to remember that one...
Very interesting stuff. I'll come back to this but for now, I hope this longpost gives you something interesting to look at. And while this may not really be my fetish fuel, technically it's a fascinating and fun bit of writing to examine!
You said I was going to like the ending. Now I gotta see where this is going!
For you!
That's one way to say "no homo!"
You are giving me so many evil idea for chapter 3 of Fecundity.
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Now there's a prodigious producer, right there! If Roseluck ever runs out of breast milk, the fam can milk him instead.
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When the writer starts criticizing his own music choices! Hilarious bit of meta.
I know it's all digital recording but I can't unhear the record-scratch sound effect.
Holy shit . The griffons would use the same word for 'dick' and 'pointy stick' seeing how turned on they are by war.
I get the feeling griffons are the kind of people who think invading another country is "fucking them" in the literal sense.
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Very much appreciated!
That’s kind of incidental, but yes!
I certainly hope so!
Thank you for that as well!
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I guess you’re right! Still, it’s funny. I would have expected that conversation on the main story, not the M-rated side story!
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They’re a bad habit of mine, sorry. But in my defense, I think to continue it there would have taken away from what came before in the chapter. So let’s save Marco’s deflowering for its own chapter to give it the proper focus and treatment it deserves. After all, the poor guy’s greatest dream and worst nightmare is about to come true all at once!
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Don’t worry, he will! And they’ll all know what they did--after the laptop is returned intact at story’s end, that is...
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That’s exactly what I was going for! And even more is coming... pun very much intended!
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Sorry, but in my further defense, I don’t like doing more than one major scene and one side scene per chapter. That way, they keep the focus and each gets the spotlight in turn. I typically use the end of chapters to set up the next chapter or scene! Such it is here, and don’t worry--Marco’s greatest fantasy and nightmare will shortly come true!
More is coming, but I got some other stuff to take care of first. Don’t worry; this is definitely not forgotten!
looking forward to next chapter
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Hmm.... Okay, I'm caught up in the story up to here. And I looked at Chapter 9 of the main story, so this night is over from that point, and the laptop is gone. But from what you're implying with your post, could there still be another Eros Chapter of this night??
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The story is marked incomplete for a reason. Don’t worry--this is NOT the end of the night; it’s just all I’ve written to this point. I certainly wouldn’t end it on a cliffhanger like this!
I didn’t complete the side story before I continued the main story because it would mean months more of waiting for the latter, and I wanted to keep the main story momentum going. Not everybody’s going to be interested in the side story, after all, and I can also use the main story to hint at things to come in the side story as they try to unravel their (mostly) missing memories of the night.
There are several chapters to go before the full tale of the night is told, trust me. And that’s to say nothing of future scenes from the main story (a second one was just reached at the end of chapter 13!), or separate scenes from this night, like Nantz with Merlina or watching Tara and Giraldi from the point of view of the outside griffons. Both are planned as bonus chapters in due time.
Until then, congrats for getting this far, and thank you for all the comments! I do very much appreciate them. As you head back to the main story, keep in mind that the side story remains incomplete, but I have every intention of finishing it over time. As Marco will learn in the next chapter, there’s plenty more still to come here--pun intended!
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The fact there's plenty of room for more scenes that "fit" later in the main story is usually the reason this wouldn't be marked complete.
Personally, I like reading stories in their chronological order. But one of my pet peeves is that many authors don't always make it clear where such side-chapters fit in with their main stories. Fortrak's Flight happens several chapters prior to this evening in relation to the main thread. I only knew where to fit the scene in my reading schedule because I took a peak at the first chapter here, so I knew when it was when I reached that moment in the main story.
However, this one has so many chapters of just that one night--Plus it's clear from the end of #11 here that there's probably more to come before it's finally over, it makes me want to wait for them to finally come out before proceeding with the main storyline. Not to mention the further adventures you've no doubt have planned down the road where stuff happens in the main story. The ambiguity of where which chapters happen when often disappoints that enjoyment.
Although, I CAN appreciate the similarity to the Hangover film--and with the laptop yet to be found, and not until then do Marco and the others find out all of what happened that night--so for now, I'll jump back over to the main story.
any idea when the next chapter might be uploaded
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Not right away, sorry. I’ve worked on Feathered Hearts almost exclusively for six months, producing over 200k words in that time between the main and side stories. For now, I need to concentrate on my other works that have been languishing for a bit (like the Unleash the Magic stories), but don’t worry--I’ll certainly be coming back to this in due course. I wouldn’t want Marco to wait too long for his greatest dream and nightmare to come true!
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i understand focusing on one thing for a long time can burn you out fast believe me i know
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That's not how that works.
For a start, it hasn't been established that the Tellus side of the portal even has that tradition. Then you've got the fact that the Queen would have to approve it, and given that the negotiations are just starting it's unlikely that's happened. A place does not become an embassy just because an ambassador moves in.
Reference.
Any outside of the US.
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While you've pointed out that things can work differently and cited a reference to an exception, this is nitpicking to the extreme and a pretty callous disregard for the suspension of disbelief readers are to afford a work of fiction. Not every possible variation in existing US Laws governing extraterritoriality need to be painstakingly combed over before undertaking a story like this. You really need to chill out and just accept this story for what it is.
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Neat. Griffon batter from the Tab. A real woman mans good Night milk ... ...
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Judging by what’s about to happen to Marco, so does a real man!
Hm... I am surprised that oral seem to be rather rare, it has so many upsides and seemed to me to be a basic procedure
Or my sex Ed was simply different
This is definitely one of my most like chapters 👍
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Like I said, between their beaks and their proclivities towards fighting as a form of foreplay, that’s just not really their thing for the most part. It’s gonig to be after this, though!
Very good to hear! Should probably give this an editing pass soon, though...