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Firesight


I'm an IT Brony who writes stories based on a show for 8-year old girls whose content is meant for anything but 8-year old girls.

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Such tease, much wow. :rainbowlaugh::yay:

Despite her lingering distaste for him, Gilda had swooped in and saved him, using her new authority as a diplomatic liaison to order the arrest of the offending griffons for breaking a prohibition against dueling humans.

Obligatory

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XbebjUYItKw

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NiiUQKFz3HU

I looked through all the chapter contents and I am disappointed at best and digested at worse.

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Why bro it is a clipfic if you don't like it why are you here in the first place

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One who's contents are advertised well in advance lol.

His seed so powerful and potent that even though she was human and not in season, it still made her fertile and impregnated her with his cubs!

And after that climax, which coated what little uncovered area of his body remained with his cream, his eaglehood finally shrank back into its sheath “It’s… it’s finally over…” Fortrakt said shakily, wondering if he could even show his face in public now. Sh-should be okay. P-probably no chance I’ll run into any of them given how big the city is. I-I’ll be fine just so long as Gilda doesn’t know and nocreature else sees me like--

He wasn’t able to finish the thought before the door to the washroom opened and the Caleponian cleaning crew entered. “BEGORRAH!” The two aproned earth pony mares shouted at the sight of him before backing out of the room quickly and slamming the door behind them.

He went fully erect again.

In the time of chimpanzees, Fortrakt was a monkey. :ajsmug:

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Such tease, much wow. :rainbowlaugh::yay:

Thanks! I was very pleased with the way it turned out. :eeyup:

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In the time of chimpanzees, Fortrakt was a monkey. :ajsmug:

Or maybe more appropriately, a Bonobo! :rainbowlaugh: They're supposed to be most sexually active ape of all.

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"Respect my Authoratah!" I remember that South Park episode. Haven't watched that show in years, but now I'm envisioning Gilda riding a Big Wheel. Thanks a lot! :rainbowlaugh:

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4th Place feature! Congrats! :yay:

Thanks! I just about jumped for joy when I saw it feature just a couple hours in. :raritystarry:

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I looked through all the chapter contents and I am disappointed at best and digested at worse.

Considering your handle, I consider that a very good thing. :ajsmug: And digested? This isn't a vore fetish fic! :rainbowlaugh:

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Why bro it is a clipfic if you don't like it why are you here in the first place

I don't know, but I actually laughed out loud when I saw the comment and who it was from. As far as I'm concerned, that means I wrote a good story! :rainbowlaugh:

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One who's contents are advertised well in advance lol.

You said it. :coolphoto:

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Getting digested is just the worst.

Especially since this isn't even a vore fic! :trollestia:

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Well, disappointed because I was hoping for some M Human on F Griffon.

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Digested because yaoi = heresy in my eyes.

Edit: But I do agree with vore

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Well, disappointed because I was hoping for some M Human on F Griffon.

You'll get it in due course. :coolphoto: But that's not the only kind of pairing I want to explore, and I think it would be very anticlimactic if I opened with Marco/Gilda. If I limit myself to M Human on F Griffon, I limit what I can do. What's wrong with reversing the genders? Or exploring a little same-sex interspecies action? In my mind, nothing. If you don't like it, then you can use the chapter content list on the story page or in the Author's Notes of each chapter to avoid it. But I'm not going to exclude it just because someone doesn't like it.

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Digested because yaoi = heresy in my eyes.

Yaoi = gay hentai, which this is not. I don't count Fortrakt's showiness as gay; the fetish there is involuntary/accidental exhibitionism. Chris may be gay, and he'll get his later, but if you're letting the possibility of same-sex scenes spoil this for you? I'm sorry, but tough. :twilightsmile: This is meant to cover a range of interests and fetishes, and just because you don't like something doesn't mean others won't either. In any event, we're opening with some very straight scenes. We'll hit them in earnest with tomorrow's chapter release.

Edit: But I do agree with vore

Not to worry. There are some fetishes I won't touch.

oh my that reads a lot like NTR stuff.
i wonder how it's going to turn out. the other chapters were quite good!

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oh my that reads a lot like NTR stuff.

It's not, trust me. :twilightsmile: You'll see over the next two chapters.

i wonder how it's going to turn out. the other chapters were quite good!

Thanks! And you won't have long to wait. it's a three-chapter arc, and you'll get the second chapter tomorrow followed by the third on Wednesday. Wild and crazy times ahead! :rainbowwild:

The Caleponian cleaning crew at the end.:rainbowlaugh:

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That was a line I added. :rainbowlaugh: Well, I mean Firesight added to the addition afterward but you get the idea.

Nice recap from the other side of things.

...Man, that stuff works quickly.

“Good thinking. And yeah, we got the ponies to magically boost some of our weapons and gear, too,” Nantz mused.

Well that's an interesting tidbit of information. I wonder what exactly the ponies did to improve on their weapons.

Anák ng tinapá!” Marco exclaimed as Fortrakt froze and Chris could only gape. “Dude, that’s even bigger than mine!”

“Holy shit, dude, no wonder you had to hide it!” Chris all but gushed, unable to tear his eyes away. “That’s awesome! Can I take a picture for my friends back home?he grabbed for his camera.
“No!”

:rainbowlaugh:

I daresay you’ve got quite the following now, and a few tiercels are even expressing a more personal interest in you, given you acted just like a proud eagless in responding to an affront on your honor.”

Yeah, I figured that particular line would get a reaction out of Fortrakt.

Comment posted by Silverblade5 deleted June 1st

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maybe replace batteries with "magic" cause that lasts longer?

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Nice recap from the other side of things.

Thanks. I’m actually throttling the story back here after a wild opening chapter to kind of reset the scene for what’s to come, and offer up a little worldbuilding and character development along the way. The most wild and crazy thing here is the fried chicken debate.

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...Man, that stuff works quickly.

Especially if you don’t weigh much like Tara and aren’t used to magic like her or Nantz. :unsuresweetie:

“Good thinking. And yeah, we got the ponies to magically boost some of our weapons and gear, too,” Nantz mused.

Well that's an interesting tidbit of information. I wonder what exactly the ponies did to improve on their weapons.

You will find out in due course. :twilightsmile:

Anák ng tinapá!” Marco exclaimed as Fortrakt froze and Chris could only gape. “Dude, that’s even bigger than mine!”

“Holy shit, dude, no wonder you had to hide it!” Chris all but gushed, unable to tear his eyes away. “That’s awesome! Can I take a picture for my friends back home?he grabbed for his camera.

“No!”

:rainbowlaugh:

I love Fortrakt. :heart: I really do! He’s such an earnest and endearing lad. He’s even adorable when he accidentally exposes himself! :rainbowlaugh:

I daresay you’ve got quite the following now, and a few tiercels are even expressing a more personal interest in you, given you acted just like a proud eagless in responding to an affront on your honor.”

Yeah, I figured that particular line would get a reaction out of Fortrakt.

Regardless of his proclivities, he’s still a griffon at heart, and we’ll see in time that he has a warrior’s heart as well. :rainbowdetermined2:

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Fun times dead ahead.

Fun times are here! The next chapter has been released. Enjoy! :rainbowwild:

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maybe replace batteries with "magic" cause that lasts longer?

I promise you’ll find out what the magical enhancements were in due course. :twilightsmile:

all the onlookers leave a lot of room for bonus chapters hehe. good chapter!

"Get a room!"
"We very clearly have!"

In any case, definitely a fruitful cultural exchange thus far. Looking forward to more diplomatic intercourse. :raritywink:

“Then let my lessons in griffon lovemaking continue, and—” she suddenly looked up and stiffened, her hands stilling against his body.

“What’s wrong?” he asked her in sudden concern.

“We’re being watched…” she warned him, staring up at the skylight behind and above him.

He turned back to see at least six sets of hungry eagle eyes glowing in the outside darkness, staring back at them.

daggum stoole pigeons

“For Is that not what intimacy is about? The forming of bonds during intense mutual pleasure? Only by us being intimate, it is not simply a bond between two beings we forge—it is a bond between two races! And if we have been brought to different sides of this door for that purpose, then I will not fight it. For the sake of both worlds, I say let it be done.”

My manz waxes poetic when horny.

Oh man I'm looking forward to him taking her.:rainbowwild:

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Heh. Funny you mention that... you'll be in for quite a treat later.

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all the onlookers leave a lot of room for bonus chapters hehe. good chapter!

Indeed they do! I currently have plans at this point for two bonus content chapters or arcs: Nantz/Merlina, and the outside observers. I suppose I should also consider doing something involving Sergeant Reyes, since he got a smaller dose of the cider, too. But what happened to him...?

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"Get a room!"
"We very clearly have!"

:rainbowlaugh: Tara: “This IS my room!”

In any case, definitely a fruitful cultural exchange thus far. Looking forward to more diplomatic intercourse. :raritywink:

With intercourse being the operative word. If nothing else, they’re negotiating far more effectively than the two Ambassadors! Next chapter launches at noon, and I don’t think you’ll be disappointed. :rainbowwild:

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““We’re being watched…” she warned him, staring up at the skylight behind and above him.

He turned back to see at least six sets of hungry eagle eyes glowing in the outside darkness, staring back at them.

daggum stoole pigeons

Well, this is what happens when you feed them a few crumbs--they not only don’t go away, but it only attracts more of them! :rainbowlaugh:

“For Is that not what intimacy is about? The forming of bonds during intense mutual pleasure? Only by us being intimate, it is not simply a bond between two beings we forge—it is a bond between two races! And if we have been brought to different sides of this door for that purpose, then I will not fight it. For the sake of both worlds, I say let it be done.”

My manz waxes poetic when horny.

Hey, for a griffon, Giraldi’s a hopeless romantic! Even Rarity would be proud of him for this one. :raritystarry:

Oh man I'm looking forward to him taking her.:rainbowwild:

You won’t have long to wait! The next chapter launches at noon today, EDT. :rainbowwild:

oh boy oh boy Fortrakt is in for a RIDE :raritywink:

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Is there going to be m/m

Yes, in later chapters. It will be clearly marked in the “Chapter content” part of the Author’s notes that start each chapter, so you can enjoy or avoid as you see fit.

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please let him be picked up by a horny eagless?

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ok i wondering if there were going to be more than 10 chapters

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oh boy oh boy Fortrakt is in for a RIDE :raritywink:

You have NO idea. :raritywink:

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please let him be picked up by a horny eagless?

I was originally thinking of a Caleponian mare, but that could work, too! And maybe it should, given this is supposed to be a human/griffon anthology... :eeyup:

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ok i wondering if there were going to be more than 10 chapters

Yes, there will be. :twilightsmile: 10 chapters is just what I had finished in time for a Memorial Day launch. Could be 15 or more chapters on this story arc before all is said and done. Even once the ten chapters are done, there's still a lot yet to get to.

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What if it's less about what he does, and more about what he fails to prevent? Those privates and specialists can get pretty rowdy when left unsupervised, and I'm pretty sure there's some glitter and Elmer's laying around somewhere :derpytongue2:

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