10806549 Ah well if i underdtand that right, preening is for bringing feathers back in line No need for that on leatherwings. Possible would be looking for insectbites, couse Ticks and a like would love the thin skin and bloodvecels there the most. Specially the inside where they are not easy to be seen
This style of writing is different than what I'm used to. I'm not sure whether it's good or bad yet, and that makes me want to read more of it to figure it out. Your flow also needs work, but that's just a matter of practice (I remember the first story I tried to write. The flow was a travesty). Flow/pacing is something you tend to learn from writing.
Aside from the writing, I'm loving the story. Keep it up!
10809145 Yeah i hope so that i am learning xD its actually my 4 Story so far i am writing, and i try every time another style, till i find The one. I am not Sure if i do something absolutly different this time but i am always amazed when i look how many people aee watching this Story, how many like it. Everytime i come here i am like: " wow... how?"
I am so thankfull for every read, for every comment and everytime i read someone put it in his favs or bookshelf...
Still think a big part for that comes from AlexDTIs Cover. It draws people in. I am glad i have meet him.
And for keeping it up: hell yeah but... there will be an end someday, for one can only see so much and fight so long...
You're welcome! Though, what's up with the link?
Gaah the side tricked me again!
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Gone now. I upload pics over another side, and sometimes, they hide links . Normaly i noticed them but every now and again, tjey slip
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Okay, just wondered when i saw what it said.
As a side note, would noctural dislike being preened?
Toxic sister.
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Preened? Wasnt that Ich bird aka pegasus-thing? Do leatherwings need preening?
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Yeah a bit xD
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Yes, that is what i meant. Just thought could be a cute scene with kallaxia. Got it as i recently worked on such a scene with amber
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Ah well if i underdtand that right, preening is for bringing feathers back in line
No need for that on leatherwings.
Possible would be looking for insectbites, couse Ticks and a like would love the thin skin and bloodvecels there the most. Specially the inside where they are not easy to be seen
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Mhm. As noted, I just thought could be cute if kallaxia would preen Noctural, as I did such a scene with Amber
This is a very, Very good batpony story
Well done
The only bad part is that i learned of this fic, and read every chapter so far, Just today.
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That are very kind words, thank you ^^
On the bright side: you had a few chapters to read xD
This style of writing is different than what I'm used to. I'm not sure whether it's good or bad yet, and that makes me want to read more of it to figure it out. Your flow also needs work, but that's just a matter of practice (I remember the first story I tried to write. The flow was a travesty). Flow/pacing is something you tend to learn from writing.
Aside from the writing, I'm loving the story. Keep it up!
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Yeah i hope so that i am learning xD its actually my 4 Story so far i am writing, and i try every time another style, till i find The one.
I am not Sure if i do something absolutly different this time but i am always amazed when i look how many people aee watching this Story, how many like it. Everytime i come here i am like: " wow... how?"
I am so thankfull for every read, for every comment and everytime i read someone put it in his favs or bookshelf...
Still think a big part for that comes from AlexDTIs Cover. It draws people in. I am glad i have meet him.
And for keeping it up: hell yeah but... there will be an end someday, for one can only see so much and fight so long...
well here's hoping Kallixia can respark his love for her and at least Twilight bought the story and is letting them stay.