I'm loving this the fourth wal brakes just make me laugh it a so funny and at the end it seems bautiful I can't wait for more keep up the amazing work but remember to take it slow and steady no need to rush
Comment posted by Rubberduck deleted Apr 30th, 2021
Not a fan of 4th wall breaking stuff myself, sorry if this sound offensive, it's kinda break the narrative for me, but I'm still curious about what will happen next.
Well Pinkie breaks the 4th wall in canon, so I can hardly fault Rubber Duck from allowing her to do so in this fic. I enjoyed this chapter and look forward to the next!
So this was it. The castle, or the ruins of it, of the two sisters. It must have been an incredibly beautiful place once. And it had only taken Nocturnal a thousand years to get here. Well now he was here. He had met Princess Luna ... where to go next? He looked at the map and the compass. Then up into the stars. If he didn't know where, then fate would decide. With the help of a branch he determined his path by dropping it on the map. north that was going to be interesting, since it had never been this far north. A good direction, then, so he packed up all his things again. But this time he got up in the air and flew. To be petrified again here in Everfree was not part of his plan this time. It wasn't the last time either ... but well ...
that pic is so cute! NIce job, I loved the fourth wall break
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AlexDTi came up with that ^^ and thank you i was chuckling at that as well^^
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of course, it just pleased me to see it again
I'm loving this the fourth wal brakes just make me laugh it a so funny and at the end it seems bautiful I can't wait for more keep up the amazing work but remember to take it slow and steady no need to rush
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Thank you for your kind words ^^ and yes i really like the 4 wall breaks too ^^ i had a lot of fun doing so xD
Not a fan of 4th wall breaking stuff myself, sorry if this sound offensive, it's kinda break the narrative for me, but I'm still curious about what will happen next.
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no offensev taken ^^
I thought he was blind in one eye?
Well Pinkie breaks the 4th wall in canon, so I can hardly fault Rubber Duck from allowing her to do so in this fic. I enjoyed this chapter and look forward to the next!
This deserves more love.
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he lost an eye but yes, why?
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Thank yo so much ^^
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I did not allow her that! She just did
yes i did
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You keep mentioning his "eyes" as in both of them, and never bring up his blind spot.
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Hmm you are right. Error on my part
Thank you for showing me i will keep that in mind from now on
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Your welcome, I like helping others.
Why is everything in bold?
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Tried to make it easier to read and separate. I dont have found ny writingstyle yet
jaja xd
i love your humor xd jaja
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Well for the Person you admire, wouldend you go one thousend mile or wait one thousend years? ^^
I thank you for your kind comment ^^