You have caught my attention and now I'm hooked you did really well here and I can't wait to see what happens next

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Nether do i ^^

Thank you very much

Lovely! I find the way he speaks most interesting

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it is isnt it? i really look forward to write more ^^

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And i look forward to see it! It looks promising!

Also, I think we met before, though I could be wrong

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we did, on Devianart and i am a bit behind reading your story ^^

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No harm done and I know, my avatar is a dead giveaway. I just could swear we saw each other here, on fim before

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Your very welcome

"Can i anon findeth out what's going on and what i'm doing h're? and wh're is mine own stuffeth? i hadst a jurnal with me, a sw'rd, and a saddlebag. can i has't yond backeth prithee?"

As a student of classical literature, my soul screamed out in pain while reading this butchery. I sent you a PM offering a bit of editing services. Once I show you how it's done I'm sure you can carry on much better.

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i would love to accept the help ^^

and i highly doubt that. English is not my first language and i was rather bad in school

On nights like this, Nocturnal loved to roam the land known as Equestria. It was a long way from germane to where he was now.

Already liking the story

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thank you. i really hope it stays like that ^^

"Hello. My name is Doctor G. W. Soon."

This has to be the greatest, punerific name for a doctor I've ever read!

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So you get it? Glad to hear xD

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Definitely not going to be a pain.

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it will couse i am bad in english and used a online translater for that. xD

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Hold up, English is your second language and you decided to have your main character speak in some ye olde version of it? Why did you think that was a good idea?