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Rubberduck
i dont really know what i am doing ^^ [Writersblock. Please hold the Line]
Rubberduck
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You have caught my attention and now I'm hooked you did really well here and I can't wait to see what happens next
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Nether do i ^^
Thank you very much
Lovely! I find the way he speaks most interesting
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it is isnt it? i really look forward to write more ^^
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And i look forward to see it! It looks promising!
Also, I think we met before, though I could be wrong
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we did, on Devianart and i am a bit behind reading your story ^^
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No harm done and I know, my avatar is a dead giveaway. I just could swear we saw each other here, on fim before
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Your very welcome
Very nice! Loved it!
Though, you seem to have forgotten a space here
I really like this story so far. The formatting and flow need work, but that's just a matter of practice really. I'm definitely interested to see where this can go.
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Oh okay thank you very much ^^
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Thank you ^^ yeah i havnt found my style yet and try to Experiment a bit.
Anny Tips or suggestions?
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You're welcome!
"He's a Batpony Mohawk." Says in a Mr. T voice.
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huehuehue okay that got me good xD
i could hear Mr.T loud and clear xD
I've fallen inlove with this story it's amazing and I can't wait to see whats next
10792651
This is something of the kindest things someone ever said about something i made.
Thank you so much
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Your welcome
Interesting.... I will stay for the changling love
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The best way I can describe your writing style would be 'one-line walkthrough'. Every thought or sentence tends to be separated onto it's own line. It's not bad per se, but it's a bit hard to read.
Generally, you want to split your writing into readable chunks no more than ~10 sentences (or 1-2 paragraphs) long. That's not to say you want a wall of text. Again, it's about readability.
But more importantly than that, have good separation between narration and dialogue. You want to be able to see when the world around you is changing versus when conversation is happening. Finding that balance is tricky and takes a while.
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I see. I will try to adapt your Tipps. Thank you ^^
that pic is so cute! NIce job, I loved the fourth wall break
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AlexDTi came up with that ^^ and thank you i was chuckling at that as well^^
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of course, it just pleased me to see it again
I'm loving this the fourth wal brakes just make me laugh it a so funny and at the end it seems bautiful I can't wait for more keep up the amazing work but remember to take it slow and steady no need to rush
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Thank you for your kind words ^^ and yes i really like the 4 wall breaks too ^^ i had a lot of fun doing so xD
Not a fan of 4th wall breaking stuff myself, sorry if this sound offensive, it's kinda break the narrative for me, but I'm still curious about what will happen next.
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no offensev taken ^^
I thought he was blind in one eye?
Well Pinkie
breaks the 4th wall in canon, so I can hardly fault Rubber Duck from allowing her to do so in this fic. I enjoyed this chapter and look forward to the next!
This deserves more love.
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he lost an eye but yes, why?
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Thank yo so much ^^
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I did not allow her that! She just did
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You keep mentioning his "eyes" as in both of them, and never bring up his blind spot.
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Hmm you are right. Error on my part
Thank you for showing me i will keep that in mind from now on
10796081
Your welcome, I like helping others.
interesting indeed and i really love that pic
So did Kallaxia abandon the hive to be with Nocturnal?
Loving the story
10798539
Now i am telling you something my DnD DM says always to Such questions:
I dont know
Well i do know
But i dont know
XD
I am loving it but I will say it dose get a little hard to read but not alot I still love jt and I can't wait for more
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What kind of hard to read? Nocturnals speachpatern or something else?
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The speech a little bit it's not a big problem it's just sometimes it's hard to understand What he was saying sometimes is all but it wasn't bad enough for me to not like it I do like how he talks and I do love h
This story
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He not being understandable is kinda the point xD it will get better, promission ^^
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Ok I hope I didn't make you think I hate how he talks I apologize if i did
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naaa you dont. It was the plan all alonge! nyhahaha
nice job and cute art once again!
Those pictures are adorable and you deserve more love for this story. I mean seriously it must be hard writing in that way for Nocturnal.
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Thank you but no its not ghus is the internet, someone has made a transkator vom english to Shakespearean ^^