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YES YES YES, this was a great first chapter. I've been wanting a displaced story like this with Levi for a while. Please make more!
I'm wondering though. Are you writing on your Phone? Because I notice alot of spelling errors that seem more like auto-correct errors. Like when you meant to say "he", it came out as "her".
Fight Me!
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Its was my idear for him to write it in fat I gave him it
Imagine if this was in the griffin the griffin universe
AoT fans are just like the AoT writers, they don't know how to make an interesting story and they fill it with unnecessary time skips.
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Sorry but I'm not really an AoT fan, I really don't care for the anime or the manga I just like Levi Ackerman as a character and I was asked to write this. The original idea was set at the end of the series which I didn't care for at all. I started at the beginning the time skip philosophy just worked in my favor to tie the TheScottishbroneyforlife's ideas into the greater story. I like the concept of Levi and changed it to fit my writing style and character type as a displaced the facotr's just play in my favor.
Is Levi the only Attack on Titan character appearing in this story?
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More than likely, as I said I don't care for the AoT franchise but i do like Levi as a character and an all around badass
Interesting start to the story, putting the groundwork to the quote-on-quote origins of Levi Ackerman
You said he got the nickname of grasshopper from his poncho twice. Copied the sentence precisely. This seems emblematic of the quality of the chapter as a whole. All this showing is better off not even said. Anything relevant, you can mention when it comes up in the actual narrative.
I skipped ahead to the latest chapter to see whether the writing improves either with experience or once you get to the main body of the story. It seems to have, so I'll continue.
Please fix your grammer.
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sorry, but I do what I can with what I have at my disposal. i don't have a dedicated editor for this story and most of it is written in my downtime at work where I don't have access to many of my grammar tools. You'll just have to deal with it I'm sorry but I do just write for fun.