Accused of a crime she didn't commit, Twilight Sparkle is wrongly imprisioned. How will she adjust if she is ever released and what dark power framed her?
And this is why solitary confinement is considered unethical. Now Twi’s mind is broke , and when they put it back (if they put it back), Twilight May never forgive them. What was this even supposed to do? If she did serve her whole sentence, what lessons did they expect her to learn?
The fact that nobody checked in on her says nothing good about any-pony in this story. But then, these are the ponies who threw a mentally ill filly into Tartarus, so it’s par for the course.
Celestia and especially Luna deserve to be in Hell, and more! For what happened to Poor Twilight!!!
And Despite wanting Twilight to give some major pay back, and watch them BURN for the betrayal. She didn't do it, and is instead a Broken Shell of her past self?!
I really hope they get major Bad Karma, and want them to DIE due to their extreme guilt for imprisoning/torturing/and breaking a Innocent pony like Twilight! 😡 😠
I am not one of those who blame from the beginning, usually, I wait until the story develops more to have an opinion, but in this case that those responsible regrets what they did and want to repair the damage done. I really, really, really want this story to continue, I don't want this to end like those other stories I've read that just didn't get updated anymore for once I hope this is an exception, you have my attention.
I just wish the chapters were longer, but I suppose you have a reason for that.
Out of curiosity, why did you choose anthro characters?
10738915 depends on the fan theory you go by some go off it being same person some go by it being a possession by malevolent spirit others say multiple personality syndrome ah la Mr hyde
10738859 The reason my chapters tend to be shorter is because I do a lot of my writing on my phone instead of on a computer so it’s harder to judge lengths that. I also tend to simply end a chapter when I’m starting a different ‘point of view’ or focus. For example starting with a chapter focusing on Twilight’s journey and how she feels and then when I want to focus on another’s feelings or thoughts or movements essentially their part of the story I do it in a new chapter so it’s less “where did this come from”y. Not saying it’s the right thing to do but when you’re writing on your phone it’s a lot easier to organize.
The reason I chose anthro is because I have a few stories in the works and all of them aren’t anthro so for a bit of a challenge I decided to try. If people are interested I could totally do one that isn’t because that’s actually what I prefer to write.
wow. what is cadence view on this?
And this is why solitary confinement is considered unethical. Now Twi’s mind is broke , and when they put it back (if they put it back), Twilight May never forgive them. What was this even supposed to do? If she did serve her whole sentence, what lessons did they expect her to learn?
The fact that nobody checked in on her says nothing good about any-pony in this story. But then, these are the ponies who threw a mentally ill filly into Tartarus, so it’s par for the course.
Look forward to see this
Continue!
Wait, is the colt still in a coma?
Celestia and especially Luna deserve to be in Hell, and more! For what happened to Poor Twilight!!!
And Despite wanting Twilight to give some major pay back, and watch them BURN for the betrayal. She didn't do it, and is instead a Broken Shell of her past self?!
I really hope they get major Bad Karma, and want them to DIE due to their extreme guilt for imprisoning/torturing/and breaking a Innocent pony like Twilight! 😡 😠
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Wait, luna was alone, wasn’t she?
I am not one of those who blame from the beginning, usually, I wait until the story develops more to have an opinion, but in this case that those responsible regrets what they did and want to repair the damage done.
I really, really, really want this story to continue, I don't want this to end like those other stories I've read that just didn't get updated anymore for once I hope this is an exception, you have my attention.
I just wish the chapters were longer, but I suppose you have a reason for that.
Out of curiosity, why did you choose anthro characters?
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NMM
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I thought they were the same person.
10738915
depends on the fan theory you go by some go off it being same person some go by it being a possession by malevolent spirit others say multiple personality syndrome ah la Mr hyde
10738859
The reason my chapters tend to be shorter is because I do a lot of my writing on my phone instead of on a computer so it’s harder to judge lengths that. I also tend to simply end a chapter when I’m starting a different ‘point of view’ or focus. For example starting with a chapter focusing on Twilight’s journey and how she feels and then when I want to focus on another’s feelings or thoughts or movements essentially their part of the story I do it in a new chapter so it’s less “where did this come from”y. Not saying it’s the right thing to do but when you’re writing on your phone it’s a lot easier to organize.
The reason I chose anthro is because I have a few stories in the works and all of them aren’t anthro so for a bit of a challenge I decided to try. If people are interested I could totally do one that isn’t because that’s actually what I prefer to write.
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Really?
Are the rest of the mane six still alive?