In a world of grand kingdoms and magic, the Maidens of Harmony have used their lives to protect us from the Nightmares. Now a dark shadow looms, and five unlikely heroes must band together to keep Maidens safe. Celestial Guard! Stand Up!
“Indeed, but I believe I also asked if I could have you for dessert,”
Subtle.
Shining Armor chopped Octavia’s head lightly, “Stop before you get slapped,” Shining turned to Rainbow Dash, “I apologize for my captain and her utter shamelessness.”
Nah, it's funny.
Shining stiffened at that, “T-thanks. I’ll, remember that, I suppose…” he muttered. Rainbow Dash giggled and walked off, visibly adding more sway to her hips with each step, “Between the two of you, it’s a wonder I still come here.”
Food's good, so's the view.
“We can’t work constantly,” Octavia said, “Taking time to refresh ourselves is healthy.”
It's true. You overwork yourself, you're gonna burn out.
“Just because we have the blessing of the Goddess doesn’t mean we’re invincible,” Octavia pointed out, “Also, the Maidens have been hunted relentlessly by both Nightmare and immoral man alike for ages. They’re terrified right now, possibly unsure who to trust.”
Not an unfair point. Plus, they might fear being "locked up for their own safety".
Shining gave Octavia a wry look. “You know, for someone who’s such a womanizer, you’re surprisingly wise at times.”
She's multifacted.
Said friend was truly a tragic beauty, with long, thick, luscious pink hair that fell down to her waist and over her shoulders, cyan eyes, and a more overtly curvy figure opposed to Rainbow Dash.
Hello, Fluttershy.
“Because she’s most definitelymy type.”
You missed a space between "definitely" and "my".
“Perfect,” Red said, his voice echoing in the minds of the other two, “Narrow down where they all have in common, and then observe that location. Together, we shall corner the Maiden, and bring her to the Underworld to break her seal. For the Moon’s Eternal Night.”
Ominous!
“M’lady, you must be a mimic,” she said, looking down a bit and smiling, “Because that chest, is too good to be true.”
Roll Persuasion.
Fluttershy blinked, feeling horribly confused, “What’s, a mimic?” she asked, tilting her head in confusion.
Pfft! Nat 1.
“Oh, I know just the thing for you, honey,” Fluttershy said, wrapping her arms around the raven haired knight and pulling her face into her bosom, “There. Is that better?”
... Are you doing this on purpose?
For some reason, people really liked resting their faces in her breasts like this. She didn’t get it, but it always made them feel better.
... Oh my god you're not.
“I think you’ve enjoyed yourself quite enough,” Shining Armor said, grabbing Tavi’s ear and pulling it, dragging her away from Fluttershy’s breasts.
Thank you, Shining.
Sadly, only partially. This armor is more of a test, to see if I can harness the Morphing Grid in my current state and give it to those bound to you, my beloved.
I mean, fair enough. Gotta start with a prototype.
Sombra nodded thoughtfully, “I, can see the benefit in this. Notably I can also see how this could backfire.”
Huh. You're, oddly smart for a Power Rangers villain.
“It’s not fair…! I’m eternally loyal to King Sombra, so why am I being out shined by that huzzy, Morgana?!”
HuSSy.
“A bit,” Rainbow Dash admitted, “I like the Wonderbolt Tavern fine enough, but the amount of people is a bit draining at times.”
So that's what the 'Bolts are. Neat!
“They’re not after me directly yet,”
I feel like "yet" is the key word.
“Mmmm… okay Dashie,” Fluttershy said in resignation, “Just please don’t overwork yourself.”
One or both of you are gonna get caught.
To him, the scent was intoxicating, and drove him into almost a frenzy.
Ah. So you're that kind of crazy person.
“Wait, no! My cabbages!” the man behind the counter cried.
Poor bastard.
Must have been charmed to damage them or something.
Or something indeed.
“Looks like you did most of the work for me,” a deep, cold voice echoed in the alleyway, making Rainbow’s blood run cold.
Ah. That's not ideal.
“I am Ash, the eldest of the Corvus Brothers,” he readied his blade, “And I am your Reaper.”
Good line liner. Solid 7/10.
“Where is she?” he demanded, “Tell me, and I might let you live.”
My guy, she's a Ranger. Why, pray tell, would she crack under pressure?
Yellow Ranger, tell us where the Maiden is now, or you shall perish here.”
Even IF she knew, you'd probably kill her ANYWAY.
While she was focused on Tyrian, Ash rushed over to her, sheathing his sword and piercing his hand into her back.
Well that ain't great.
I promised… Vinyl, that I’d…!
Oh?
“We still have some money left over from when we left Cloudsdale. I’ll even get something for Dashie, so she won’t have to cook right away when she gets home.”
Fluttershy...
“Long pink hair, doe eyed look on her face, and large breasts? I think I found who the Corvus Brothers were looking for,” Chrysalis purred, watching Fluttershy leave from a distance, “This is almost too easy, just how I like it~”
Yeah, Fluttershy, doesn't appear to be too bright in this.
Yay! It's back! After I posted the first chapter of my Power Rangers story too! Admit it, it was my story that got you working on this chapter. Just admit it!
I've been thinking about my Kamen Rider story. I should tell you more later in a private message and not here.
11461906 *chuckles* Sorry to burst your bubble, but this was something I'd been planning to work on for a while, so it wasn't your story that got me interested in this story again.
Subtle.
Nah, it's funny.
Food's good, so's the view.
It's true. You overwork yourself, you're gonna burn out.
Not an unfair point. Plus, they might fear being "locked up for their own safety".
She's multifacted.
Hello, Fluttershy.
You missed a space between "definitely" and "my".
Ominous!
Roll Persuasion.
Pfft! Nat 1.
... Are you doing this on purpose?
... Oh my god you're not.
Thank you, Shining.
I mean, fair enough. Gotta start with a prototype.
Huh. You're, oddly smart for a Power Rangers villain.
HuSSy.
So that's what the 'Bolts are. Neat!
I feel like "yet" is the key word.
One or both of you are gonna get caught.
Ah. So you're that kind of crazy person.
Poor bastard.
Or something indeed.
Ah. That's not ideal.
Good line liner. Solid 7/10.
My guy, she's a Ranger. Why, pray tell, would she crack under pressure?
Even IF she knew, you'd probably kill her ANYWAY.
Well that ain't great.
Oh?
Fluttershy...
Yeah, Fluttershy, doesn't appear to be too bright in this.
Totally worth the wait!
Nice to see this story return. Now I wonder who Rainbow Dash will get partnered with? Going to reread the story to see if I can figure it out.
WOOHOO! IT'S BAAAAAAAAACK!
Yay! It's back! After I posted the first chapter of my Power Rangers story too! Admit it, it was my story that got you working on this chapter. Just admit it!
I've been thinking about my Kamen Rider story. I should tell you more later in a private message and not here.
11461906
*chuckles* Sorry to burst your bubble, but this was something I'd been planning to work on for a while, so it wasn't your story that got me interested in this story again.
11461940
Okay... :(