Intersting dream and a way to start a story.

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Thank you

Normally I am not so fond of starting a story with a dream, it is very tricky and if the reader finds out too fast, it bores them. Though, it seemed the only natural way to let this story start with an adventure scene which fits for Fiery's POV.

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You're welcome, fair enough.

A recurring dream... Hmmm, that is very interesting. And where does one get an army of Kirins?

The dragon family dynamics was interesting as well! Like that Fiery was having to protect her Bat Pony lover from her father and brother.

Looking forward to seeing how this pans out.

Wow, that's something. I still have so many questions and now even more. Will it get as bloody as the opening or is the point of the story to avoid that. It seems obvious but I'm counting on the god guy mostly wanting Fiery because of her connection to Fortuna. I feel sad I didn't't get to see the beginning of Fiery and Illuminated's relationship, I hope we can get a sidestory or a flashback chapter but it is always great to see how people do in a relationship then them just kissing at the end and that's all she wrote. One small thing i wanna see is Kindling's character. How would a Pegasus act if he had a Dragon father and exactly how draconic would he be?