A Wayfinders Guide to Equestria

by Ellery Quinn

The Author

Author's Note:

Our cast so far (only people encountered already, if you're wondering based on the tags)...
The Author: no data confirmed
The Transformed and displaced
Arvax: a unicorn mare
Ellory: An earth pony (they finally got around to visiting her)
Brynn: a dragon wizard
Jordan: A pegasi
Philip: a gryphon
Will: The half-elf
The Antagonists
Meerak: A lich
Minions: Various monsters including the shadows
The people already here
Twilight sparkle: An Alicorn
Spike: A Dragon/ Twilight's #1 assistant

Dnd statistics for our heroes shall be cooked up and linked to later.
We now return to our story.

That embarrassing scene last chapter was a very good exercise In watching where you are going. I was about to call it quits when the moment I was about to give up I heard a clacking reminiscent of a typewriter and a figure appeared in front of me, incorporeal with a malicious grin on his face. "Giving up so soon o great one?"

"Who are you and what is your business here" I shouted out to the figure. He simply grinned even wider and said to me, "I am a teller of tales, a sculptor of world's. You Meerak have a role to play. You will get the sword and bring it to me."

I looked at him and said, "Why should I believe you are more than a phantasm, a figment of my mind, an illusion."

Suddenly Meerak felt pain, greater than what he had felt for century's.

"I'll do anything! Just make it stop!" I pleaded, helpless for the first time in centuries. "Bring me the sword, or I will edit you out of the story."

Nevertheless I agreed. and in the blink of an eye, the figure vanished, and the pain stopped. Only a malevolent chuckle on the wind, almost inaudible, showed any sign he was there. I do not know what he meant by editing me out, but I was not taking any chances.

To be continued (with a longer chapter next time.)...

Comments

[Oreng Pingvin]

sorry dude, but this story is a little confusing and the chapters seem small to me (perhaps due to the fact that I usually read from 5000 to 80,000 per chapter, but since this is a beginner first and you also wrote that you will increase the size) but this is not about that, although there are disadvantages (they are everywhere) this story is interesting (well, perhaps everything) and how do you (brackets) as well as the meaning of this commentary (after all, I did not understand it (there is this comment
P.S tight turns are super
P.S.Sthis comment has no semantic meaning

[Ellery Quinn]

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I appreciate all feedback. The length is due to varying amounts of time to write said chapters. .
The thing about the tree comes from one of the versions of the King Arthur legend where The lady of the lake courted Merlin, convinced him to share the secrets of his magic, and imprisoned him in a tree using those same secrets, though the type of tree varies. And our main character can get off topic easily. all brackets stuff that is the commentary to explain some of the more obscure mythology stuff, or give background info not immediately relevant, but still things I want you to know.

[Oreng Pingvin]

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