“They took away your innocence then took away your mind. That nearly cost all of Equestria due to their anger and evil. We nearly lost the one whom was meant to save Equestria, not destroy it. Bring balance to the lands, not to leave it darkness!” She held back a growl and her horn glowed brightly. Dusk wasn’t sure what she was going to do but he was prepared to defend them. Luna saw this from the corner of her eyes and a half sob, half chuckle left her.
I don't know if I'm interpreting this the wrong way but nightmare moon seems to be the only truly remorseful one. It likes the others feel a bit bad with how it went down but then turn around and be like, it's not all bad and maybe this time you can see things my way.
Yeah Dusk forgiving is ok but at least hold some resentment.
10787057 I know one but its like 1k words and its on the mother Luna group but idk anything else, I think it'd be cool if we worked together to find stories like that though
10787059 I agree it would be more effective to unite, but I also do not know stories with similar topics. the only thing I can remember is this story where Nightmare moon became Luna's daughter (like a small child) and without any enmity between them. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/428714/mother-moon-daughter-nightmare
10866305 Fair enough, still I'd like to know their thoughts at some point, considering what's happened. Not only have the four villainesses that have had their way with Dusk have returned, but they've done so with foals that are around the CMC's ages. That has got to be a lot to take in. I can see the Crusaders overhearing them and wanting to visit the new 'foals' in town themselves.
10866858 I will say the foals will have there time but I gotta first see how im going to tackle key elements such as the time gap for every one. Not to mention how much this will be clop with a plot or if is just going to be a story with explicit settings
Don't worry about the Delay things take time, and some times the world like to Throw grenades at our time
, Else Really Good Update there Cheers![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
neat
Good chapter very good
dusk goin for number 5 i see
Wow... this was one doozy of a chapter!
10732714![:rainbowderp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowderp.png)
Or 4 1/2....
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Tell me about it Eris wrote 2/3s of it
Star Wars Episode 3 reference?
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Episode 3, young justice, and a little bit of equestria girls with midnight sparkle as a preemptive look at a possible future
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=QiZNSzWIaLo
amazing chapter
who are Luna and Nightmare moon to each other here? Clones? mother and daughter? sisters? I somehow want to see more interaction between them.
I don't know if I'm interpreting this the wrong way but nightmare moon seems to be the only truly remorseful one.
It likes the others feel a bit bad with how it went down but then turn around and be like, it's not all bad and maybe this time you can see things my way.
Yeah Dusk forgiving is ok but at least hold some resentment.
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its pretty much that so it might change
It will be so cathartic if the villainess sans nightmare were given that brutal "reason you suck speech" like the one ember gave garble.
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Yeah something like that might come into play
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I always liked a mother daughter type thing but Luna despises her daughter but idk what interpretation nightmare would her mother
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I am also interested in a similar concept.
Do you have familiar stories that raise this issue? (preferably longer than one chapter)
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I know one but its like 1k words and its on the mother Luna group but idk anything else, I think it'd be cool if we worked together to find stories like that though
10787059
I agree it would be more effective to unite, but I also do not know stories with similar topics.
the only thing I can remember is this story where Nightmare moon became Luna's daughter (like a small child) and without any enmity between them.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/428714/mother-moon-daughter-nightmare
I'd like to see a chapter to see how the rest of Mane 6 are handling all of this.
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Most likely an interlude will be added. Not trying to dish out to much background noise.
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Fair enough, still I'd like to know their thoughts at some point, considering what's happened. Not only have the four villainesses that have had their way with Dusk have returned, but they've done so with foals that are around the CMC's ages. That has got to be a lot to take in. I can see the Crusaders overhearing them and wanting to visit the new 'foals' in town themselves.
10866858
I will say the foals will have there time but I gotta first see how im going to tackle key elements such as the time gap for every one.
Not to mention how much this will be clop with a plot or if is just going to be a story with explicit settings
“next couple of chapters ahead“
Yessssss
This was a beautiful and heart warming chapter I hope that if Dusk makes a herd with the villainess Luna can join it and fingers crossed more.