I’m not one to overthink about complicated situations, but when you’re someone like me, who at one point was just like every other human on Earth, only to end up getting killed and reincarnated in another world, you can’t help but ask questions.
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Great chapter!!! Please keep it up and don’t lose dedication to the work!
Not going to lie. Gilda screaming The R-word threw me off. It doesn't feel like the Gilda thing to do.
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Should I change it? I thought I would try something different, but I guess it was too far. Sorry about that.
Ooooo!!! Very nice. Loved this chapter and can't wait for more
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I'd recommend it. I'm not soft or anything like that, but her screaming just doesn't fit her character or the Gilda you establish. She is the resident punk tough girl. She would never play the hapless vicitum. She'd be screaming and cursing up a storm; ready to fight. Her screaming rape makes her one of those despicable cowards. And Gilda's character - while abrasive - is still likable. It's ultimately up to you since it's your story.
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No, I get it. Thank you for your input. I’ll change it to something else. 🙂
Glad to see you’re back!
Although short, this was an enjoyable chapter. Really showcased Will’s intolerance for bullying and how he isn’t afraid to step in.
Intrigued to see how the summons with the Princesses will go compared to the original version.
Take care till then!
I have just found this wonderful story and I am really enjoying it but I just have to point out something. There have been a few moments where what has been written has seemed to be forgotten. Twi acted like she had never seen a smartphone even after in a previous chapter she and Will had spent a majority of the day taking selfies and such. Also Will has already heard of Canterlot and made the comment about Camelot and mentioned King Arthur. Other than that this story has been very enjoyable.
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Yeah…I gotta make notes from now on so nothing is repeated. 😅