I’m not one to overthink about complicated situations, but when you’re someone like me, who at one point was just like every other human on Earth, only to end up getting killed and reincarnated in another world, you can’t help but ask questions.
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Ah Lyra... i knew there would be a moment where she would have quite the introduction. You can't really have a human in Equestria without her having such a reaction.
Nice chapter man. I can't wait for more of this. Can't wait to see more of Will's powers and what can do. Who know. Maybe he can transform in the the myth.
Lyra is a staple in HiEs after all.
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Hmm...I was trying to offer some constructive criticism so you could fix it and make the story better, but since you're kind of being an ass, I've decided to do that. Also, no need to bother stating the obvious.
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Yeah honestly dude you have no room to criticize dude. First off all you clearly haven't watched any dragon ball, dragon ball z, or dragon ball super if you think someone who new to Ki can beat an alicorn who had centuries of experience using magic.
Also last I checked your own story has like 12 dislikes and one like. That one like being from you no doubt because you needed that to make yourself feel better.
You can come back and make all the criticism you want, when you write a story that has at least 100 likes, and isn't a cringy piece of crap.
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First of all, I haven't liked my own story, and I don't need to because I've always felt amazing about myself. I've got a hot body, good looks, and I literally have everything else that I could ever want. Secondly, now if you want to come talk shit to my face, then I'll be more than happy to beat the fear of me into you. If you're too much, then I'll use an equalizer and win by fighting dirty. However, I have yet to meet anyone who can beat me in any type of fight, mainly because I just shrug off everything that's thrown at me. Against fighters that are actually trained in CQC and other skilled people, all I have to do is tank blow after blow and move after move until they eventually start to slow down. I don't slow down and/or get tired when I'm furious, so even though they're better fighters, they've fallen before me all the same. Things like broken bones don't mean anything if I'm too furious to notice them at the time.
Also, from my perspective, it is you who doesn't have the best taste in fanfiction, along with the other 12 who disliked my story. So screw you, I'll make criticism whenever I want, as long as I think it's necessary. Again, even if his new ability to use ki isn't enough, then he can still use speed, shock tactics, or deceit to get close enough to grab her horn and end it that way.
Lastly, I've written serious stories that have gotten over 100 faves, follows, and comments on a different fanfiction website, so been there done that. Now, are we done here?
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Honestly I was laughing while reading this whole thing Lmao. You act like a Chihuahua barking at a Grate Dane. It's hilarious how you have to talk yourself up to seem even a hint threatening. I'm gonna screenshot this whole conversation and show it on social media, so everyone else can enjoy this.
Have fun with you sad, single life my friend.
Hope there will be more chapters in really loved this story