Normally I don't read stories with the Gore tag. Not through lack of interest, but through lack of almost any writer's ability to make them good. The description of this one caught my interest though, and I gave it a rare chance. Though I figured it would be pretty horrible, quality wise.
It was pretty horrible, quality wise. But entertaining too, in it's own way I suppose, which was a surprise.
I won't upvote it, but I'm not going to downvote it either.
1198889 It would take a herculean effort for you to disgust me. Horrible in that, well, the pacing was wrong; it went too fast. There were grammar and spelling mistakes throughout. You could have expanded on the personalities a little more; give us more common sense reasons to hate the villain/victim. Some of the things he did were quite unlikely, and though it had the intended effect of making the reader hate him, it also just felt... well, forced. Rushed.
If there was one thing I would have suggested when writing this, it was to take your time and make it a bit longer. I realize it was probably just for fun; not intended to be anything too serious, but still...
Wow, I never looked at this much gore in one day before. Something's wrong with me, though I want to add that I find it rather funny than arousing. If it wasn't so small I'd have fucked him with his own dick by the way *needs a therapist right now*
1198913 Meh, crack fic's about torture were never meant to be totally serious anyway, just satisfying. It's very hard to do otherwise.
1198752 1198796 I think you guys are after this: Pinkamena,The Pink Shadow, my god that story was full of aids, as was the author. I should really go direct Darkdrome here for a laugh to see how he reacts.
Can I help write the gore and torture? (also it'd be hilarious if they were concerned for spikes innocence, then it turns out he's the sickest fuck there).
Holy fucking shit! What in god's name have I gotten myself into?!
1165966 Something in the darkest recesses of my blackened, rotting mind.
Aand here goes Trigger.
Why is he doing exacly what I would in this situation?
Oh, because he is me.
Anyways, I actually found the fucking scene pretty arousing. I request skullfucking!
1176577 Then skullfucking you shall see!
Hmm, Dark Slash, where have I heard that before?
Oh yes, now I remember.
1195949 Oooooh, yeeeaaahh *nods and smirks*
Well then, this shall be a FUN and enjoyable read my god man
Dude, am I spike?
1196131 That depends, do his actions mimic ones you might do if put in a similar situation?
1196146
Probably. Can spike burn his face?
1196359 I'll add that, don't you worry
AAAAWWWW YEAH IT IS ON
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<---- That one?
1198734 We can pull up yours to the story if you want
That is right, 1159251, from which story was the alicorn again?
1198752 The one from the "Ermagerd guys Look at this!" post on our group.
1198752 The one from the "Ermagerd guys Look at this!" post on our group.
1198734 Not that one.
Normally I don't read stories with the Gore tag. Not through lack of interest, but through lack of almost any writer's ability to make them good.
The description of this one caught my interest though, and I gave it a rare chance. Though I figured it would be pretty horrible, quality wise.
It was pretty horrible, quality wise. But entertaining too, in it's own way I suppose, which was a surprise.
I won't upvote it, but I'm not going to downvote it either.
1198882 By horrible, do you mean really disgusting, or just bad storytelling? Because I can easily repair the bad storytelling thing.
1198889
It would take a herculean effort for you to disgust me.
Horrible in that, well, the pacing was wrong; it went too fast. There were grammar and spelling mistakes throughout. You could have expanded on the personalities a little more; give us more common sense reasons to hate the villain/victim. Some of the things he did were quite unlikely, and though it had the intended effect of making the reader hate him, it also just felt... well, forced. Rushed.
If there was one thing I would have suggested when writing this, it was to take your time and make it a bit longer. I realize it was probably just for fun; not intended to be anything too serious, but still...
1198913 Your suggestion has been taken into consideration and is being integrated into the story as we speak.
1198932
Glad to be of help, I guess. Good luck.
KILL IT WITH FIRE!
oh, and "Everfree Forest" should be capitalized :p
but I'm nitpicky
Excellent.
Wow, I never looked at this much gore in one day before. Something's wrong with me, though I want to add that I find it rather funny than arousing. If it wasn't so small I'd have fucked him with his own dick by the way *needs a therapist right now*
Despite the easily-fixed grammar mistakes, I enjoyed this. You've earned yourself another upvote.
1198913
Meh, crack fic's about torture were never meant to be totally serious anyway, just satisfying. It's very hard to do otherwise.
1198752
1198796
I think you guys are after this: Pinkamena,The Pink Shadow, my god that story was full of aids, as was the author. I should really go direct Darkdrome here for a laugh to see how he reacts.
Can I help write the gore and torture? (also it'd be hilarious if they were concerned for spikes innocence, then it turns out he's the sickest fuck there).
1200130 Shit I remember this
Also, your ideas are brilliant as always.
1200130 I think Darkdrome7 would love this!
Also, sure, you can help. Just send me a PM and we can get started.
1200154
Can I be spike?
1200177 Sure, just tell me what you want him to do to DS and I'll consider it before adding it in
1200130 Borrow an electric egg beater from Pinkie and stick the fucker in his mouth
1200233 tongue slushy, anypony?
1161953
what does mfw mean?
1200608 mfw: my face when