God, bad. So many spelling errors, you literally are allergic to capitalizing properly or something, can't parse proper sentence structure at all

Oh yeah, and the mortal sin of anon. God I want that trend to die.

Delightful.

I can't wait to see their (the ponies) reactions.

after that day discord and anon became a unstoppable team

I liked this, it's nice to see how Anon gets some revenge for the ponies beings so intrusive and lack of common sense in regards to Anon's privacy and personal space.

Please one more chapter. What happened to The confrontation that was supposed to be a short chapter? Also, wish we could see what scared Pinkie, Rainbow Dash, Luna and Applejack.

That's it? Nothing else? Unless there is a sequel coming that's a terrible placecto declare the story completed. He terrifies them, and then nothing?

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I totally agree. The grammatical errors in this chapter hit a point where I had to stop reading.

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pretty much

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sorry but after this chapter, i kindof got burned out for it. but let's just say that the ponies now fear Anon, in some manner

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.......in kind of burned out on this fic, as i don't think it's one of my more passable stories. but if you want (and if others want) i'll make the supposed short chapter of the ponies reaction to the last trip to Anon's dreams.

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i was kind of burned out for this fic, but after resting up, i'll make the final chapter later on.

"Why don’t you and I try to get to know each other over some comfort food?” Discord said with a grin, while Anon just whipped the drooling saliva away before nodding.

Oh boy, this can only mean good things

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Really, it isn't bad at all, its pretty good. That was just a bad place to end it because it was abrupt and lqcked significance ending it there. Ending it there COULD be good, if handled right, like if it went implying the ponies were taught a lesson or showed some tact.

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true. but don't worry, the reason that chapter was burnt me out was because i trying to figure out what dream Anon had that would, make the ponies think twice before diving back into his mind. i'm already rough drafting the actual last chapter.

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I can't help but wonder what the ponies will actually do though, g8ven they have no excuse the inly way they can become his friends again is to admit they were totally in the wrong.

Took me a while to find this cartoon

but just replace the bell with the horn

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If/when there's more, I'd love to see Anon take a whole Skittles bag of ponies into some additional Lovecraft realms.
Luna should love that stuff.

This is really enjoyable, and these first 3 chapters are worth the read.
Keep up the good work.