"Oh you have no idea! But it ain't nothing I can't handle."
Ain't seems like something that wouldn't come out of Twilights mouth.
"I didn't have no one to help me with this, so I thought you could help me."
No one > anyone. Remember, this is Twilight. She would be a stickler for correct grammar. (If there's anything to do with punctuation in the story won't be able to help you there though.) Good story.
Pretty nice little romance story, although part of me is now wondering how that events with the other main 6 went and/or happen. And if ponies like Fluttershy or say…Starlight (if she was one of them) are aching for some action again.
It could be funny if Fluttershy try to pull the same trick Twilight did in the house in ponyville and when those two arrive Twilight only sigh in disappointment and look at Anon saying
"Sweetie, you have to tell me in advance if we are doing a threesome" She scold him and shake her head in disappointment before stepping inside and remove her shirt while smiling at Fluttershy "Hi Fluttershy, heard the couple of bunnies finally had their babies, congratulation! I hope you let me see them at some point"
And Anon is just left with his jaw on the floor Twilight keep stripping while casually talking with Fluttershy
One year has passed! Things around Ponyville have changed, including the lives of your friends. They all stayed in close contact with you and still came over to see you, but they all had their own lives to live. Pinkie was now in a solid relationship with Cheese Sandwich and was now taking over the business for the Cakes while they were enjoying their retirement. Applejack went on to take full control of Sweet Apple Acres after the unfortunate passing of Granny Smith. And was officially a couple with Rainbow Dash! You knew that they couldn't keep their secret hush hush for very long, and you even helped them admit their feelings with each other which made your friendship with them even closer!
Ain't seems like something that wouldn't come out of Twilights mouth.
No one > anyone. Remember, this is Twilight. She would be a stickler for correct grammar. (If there's anything to do with punctuation in the story won't be able to help you there though.) Good story.
Pretty nice little romance story, although part of me is now wondering how that events with the other main 6 went and/or happen. And if ponies like Fluttershy or say…Starlight (if she was one of them) are aching for some action again.
It could be funny if Fluttershy try to pull the same trick Twilight did in the house in ponyville and when those two arrive Twilight only sigh in disappointment and look at Anon saying
"Sweetie, you have to tell me in advance if we are doing a threesome" She scold him and shake her head in disappointment before stepping inside and remove her shirt while smiling at Fluttershy "Hi Fluttershy, heard the couple of bunnies finally had their babies, congratulation! I hope you let me see them at some point"
And Anon is just left with his jaw on the floor Twilight keep stripping while casually talking with Fluttershy
really good story, one of the highest quality one shots I've read. best regard, darkbroney666
nice story keep it up
Very good story. I enjoyed every minute of it.
What were the reasons?
The Terms had been Double