Who would of guessed a portal to another dimension would open up in my room no less. Being teleported to a colourful fantasy land of mythic proportions is pretty jarring, let's see where this goes shall we?
10230787 Sorry! I'll try to shorten them, sometimes I get too into the writing and I sort of forget to space my paragraphs haha. Im glad you like my cover! :)
If I know my human in equestria stories it's going to go down the path of your self insert fucking your way through the cast or gaining some kind of god power that lets you fuck your way through the cast. Just a hunch.
10231181 I hopefully don't want to do that. I actually want to expand the world and make it bloody interesting to read instead of it going absolutely fuckin no where. Right now I'm trying to build relationships.
Yes there will be a few suggestive themes but we are somewhat a little ways away from that kind of thing. I also don't want my character to be op, because that isn't fun without him actually progressing and getting stronger.
10252845 In terms of this story, I wouldn't go into so much detail about how much the draw weight is. This is not a story that delves into so much detail as for some people detail like that is only prominent when necessary to the story. And for bows and swords being on par, what I meant was that their magical capabilities (Not their strength) are on the somewhat same level to each other.
Depending on the strength of the string and a good enough technique of the person, the bow definitely could be better than a sword, not including the range factor. Like swords, they're better at close quarters, or unless you want to throw it like a spear (Not sure why you would do that though.)
So basically, I haven't put in a lot of detail as of what you've shown me, but it has made me think a little and I might want to incorporate a few things later on. And to be honest I haven't exactly thought out everything yet so there might be a few plot holes I'll have to fill.
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Sorry! I'll try to shorten them, sometimes I get too into the writing and I sort of forget to space my paragraphs haha. Im glad you like my cover! :)
death by snu snu totally
Death by snu snu all the way.
If I know my human in equestria stories it's going to go down the path of your self insert fucking your way through the cast or gaining some kind of god power that lets you fuck your way through the cast. Just a hunch.
10231181
I hopefully don't want to do that. I actually want to expand the world and make it bloody interesting to read instead of it going absolutely fuckin no where. Right now I'm trying to build relationships.
Yes there will be a few suggestive themes but we are somewhat a little ways away from that kind of thing. I also don't want my character to be op, because that isn't fun without him actually progressing and getting stronger.
Cheers for your comment! :)
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Heheh. Cheers lad!
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The edgy outfit was indeed cringy at the start, but for a good reason.
However, later along in the story those clothes especially the coat will be useful and somewhat detrimental.
I have it all planned, don't worry.
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In terms of this story, I wouldn't go into so much detail about how much the draw weight is. This is not a story that delves into so much detail as for some people detail like that is only prominent when necessary to the story. And for bows and swords being on par, what I meant was that their magical capabilities (Not their strength) are on the somewhat same level to each other.
Depending on the strength of the string and a good enough technique of the person, the bow definitely could be better than a sword, not including the range factor. Like swords, they're better at close quarters, or unless you want to throw it like a spear (Not sure why you would do that though.)
So basically, I haven't put in a lot of detail as of what you've shown me, but it has made me think a little and I might want to incorporate a few things later on. And to be honest I haven't exactly thought out everything yet so there might be a few plot holes I'll have to fill.
Cheers for your comments!