Who would of guessed a portal to another dimension would open up in my room no less. Being teleported to a colourful fantasy land of mythic proportions is pretty jarring, let's see where this goes shall we?
10319162 In height Luna and Twilight are somewhat slightly taller. Celestia obviously being the tallest and the rest either being slightly smaller or on par. My mistake though, I may have fucked up somewhere in the earlier chapters. Don't worry I'll have it rectified.
10319162 Also, if you read my authors note in the latest chapter, I was pretty much half asleep. xD So if there are anymore errors point then out whenever you can.
10319286 The Last chapter you did the countdown to the fight you put Then three down two times.
Then three. I still had my thumb just under the guard ready to fire away. My feet were in a position of getting ready to launch myself at her. I definitely knew that even if she hadn’t had a weapon I most certainly can’t be relaxed around her.
10319349 Hey, no need to apologise! I really appreciate you taking the time out of your day to correct my mistakes. I’ve just gone through the entire chapter and found a lot more. I guess I was really out of it because I noticed there was a bit of a sentence that was half-finished near the first part of the chapter. Oops.
This story does not make any sense his nose comes up to Princess Celestia chin In the first chapter now everybody taller than him the fuck
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In height Luna and Twilight are somewhat slightly taller. Celestia obviously being the tallest and the rest either being slightly smaller or on par. My mistake though, I may have fucked up somewhere in the earlier chapters. Don't worry I'll have it rectified.
Cheers!
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Also, if you read my authors note in the latest chapter, I was pretty much half asleep. xD So if there are anymore errors point then out whenever you can.
I'm glad you brought this to my attention.
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The Last chapter you did the countdown to the fight you put Then three down two times.
Then three. I still had my thumb just under the guard ready to fire away. My feet were in a position of getting ready to launch myself at her. I definitely knew that even if she hadn’t had a weapon I most certainly can’t be relaxed around her.
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Fuuuuck. Cheers for noticing. I really appreciate the help! :)
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Np and sorry
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Hey, no need to apologise! I really appreciate you taking the time out of your day to correct my mistakes. I’ve just gone through the entire chapter and found a lot more. I guess I was really out of it because I noticed there was a bit of a sentence that was half-finished near the first part of the chapter. Oops.
Cheers mate!
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😉👍