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Love this chapter pal! Also when reading this chapter. A comic title (That I made up) Popped into my head for some reason
Which continuity of Jason Todd are you using?
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I am using the Red Hood when he meets Artemis and Bizarro, but with a few minor changes as explained in the first chapter
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Perhaps
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This is going to be good
There are not many Red Hood stories, this story is great so far.
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Thank you, don't forget to tell me what you like and dislike so far.
This was a instance memory chapter and battle chapter. It had me on edge a couple time's. I hope Celestia and Luna join a herd with him
When describing the mane 6’s clothes, I believe you meant to say “skirts”, not “shirts”.
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I will say that so far, the story is pretty good. Perhaps it feels a bit rushed, but that's just me, and it is only the second chapter, so I'll let that part slide for now. The real issue for me is the grammar in it. So many spelling mistakes or even missing words. I think you just need to reread through the chapters and look for any mistakes that are there, and I do mean reread them CAREFULLY. Trust me, I know that it can be hard to find mistakes in your own story, I still find mistakes in my stories that I wrote years ago.
Though if you ever do need some help with edits or ideas, I'm always up to offer my free services. In any case, keep up the good work!
The princesses wants to what!?
Kinky~
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I think it was meant to be speak not spread
Luna's first interaction with Jason was his Jason's "One Bad Day". damn....