Oooo. This is pretty good. Next chapter I go. Away!!!

lol, litteraly just ordered my first yoyo in 4 years, too bad the shipping takes 14 days

I looked down and saw people, no.... Horses but they were standing up right and had human like bodies. Some even had horns or wings, some didn't and they were all very.... Colorful

You should add "anthro" tag

This is one interesting beginning I can't wait to see where this goes.

I fucked under a swing and did a swift kick to his face

Hmmm...something seems off here...

Eh, duck it, back to the story!

I love quoting without context

I was currently laying down on top of a roof waiting for Dick

Hmmm.........
An interesting start. The Empress of Darkness approves and shall continue reading this fic