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I love happy chapters like this.
YES, and now. Let us wait for the LEWDS!
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This was beyond epicly heart warming/touching, I'm so happy for there new family I love that Scoots was adopted I hope that the family continues to grows . I hope they can reform Chrysalis and she joins to in the future.
Ah shit, now we have to worry about that bald douche trying to hurt Jasons new family, may God have mercy on his soul cause Jason sure won't.
I wonder what Lex Luther’s up to and I also think he won’t be working alone.
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Can’t wait!
A okay chapter. Didn't like that the mares overreact much. I mean, Jason need to get his own issues in order, and has to see his Bat Family for the last time. So technically, it's not his fault, so no need to f******* burn him in a pike, cut his privates or something. He can just kick ALL your asses to defend himself. ( He probably won't, BUT he can defend himself )
Besides, Batman himself wouldn't like that if you do that to Jason any how.
And another thing, how can he himself get "scared", I kinda get that he cries ( Which is still CRINGE to me ), but that AIN'T my Jason Todd, and a little out of character here.
Plus, what the f*** is Lex Luthor doing here? Why is he messing with Jason and the Pony Population??!! Superman ain't here, buddy!!!!!!
P.S. So the timeline is after Season 2?
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Jason can get scared as he does clearly have PTSD from his time locked away with the Joker, plus while Jason is clearly a tough guy he is not invincible, I wanted to try and show a bit of character growth for him. For him to face his demons and finally put them to rest, I get that this isn't the best way to show it but I still like the idea. Now I'm not trying to argue or hate on you or anything, that's now what I'm trying to do.
Also to answer your question yes this does take place after Season 2 and next chapter will lead us on to Season 3. Get ready for some action!
Start of Season 3 + Lex Luthor with a small black crystal-like key? Hmm? What are you up to lexy and what the heck is that key for?
I got a feeling Sombra going to make an appearance.
I guess Equestria is the new Gotham.
Your pacing could use some work maybe make this confession several chapters instead of just one. Also yes as you said in an earlier comment Jason has his demons the reaction were over the top especially Jason saying what he did was unforgivable and the girls know what he went through they could have been far more understanding with him. Also yeah the crossover moments feel forced and out of place in this story.
I wonder if Jason will find out what had happened at the canterlot wedding, because he probably wouldn’t be happy to find out how shining armor, the mane 5, and celestia ignorantly disowned twilight.
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Yeah, I will keep that in mind. I do want to make sure that you all continue to enjoy my story, and if a new chapter is too long I will break it down for a better form of pacing.
You got to let Jason become a father figure for spike
So Lex Luthor is in in Equestria?
This won't end well...
Also maybe you can have DC heroes show up. Like Jaime Reyes/Blue Beetle or Wally West/ Flash?